Comment my new poem "Lullaby". I'd like to hear your opinions on my poems and how I could improve. (:

The little girl inside of me still smiles at the thought of you. I guess she hasn't discovered yet that nothing lasts forever.

My determination and stubborn-ness is the only thing that keeps us going everyday. I'm determined to prove them wrong, and too stubborn to let go of what I know can be fixed.

Young love is dumb love. Whatever you may call it, it's still love. So what should it matter? (:

Every "I love you" is like an adrenaline shock that keeps my heart beating.

It sounds cute when I say you swept me off my feet. In all reality, you just pushed me on the ground.

As the weather got colder, so did our love.

They keep telling me that I'm wasting my time, that you're not worth it. I can't wait for the day I listen.

Life without you is like living in a world without flowers; dull and pointless.

Love is like a movie. You have the main characters, the co-stars, the drama, the problem, the solution, and the ending that is just a beginning to a sequel.