Writing has just recently become a hobby for me. I would like to actually become more talented and part of that process is constructive criticism. I have leather skin so please don't be afraid to be honest. |
The sweetest juices come from the fruit between...
The longest journey ever taken starts in her eyes...
Thatâ??s all I ask of her, so simple...
But accusations are all I get every time I blink...
The making of it has nothing to do with birds nor...
A slow caress of her breasts, lips locked in a...
Call it for what it is or we can pretend
Friends forever, we're together to the end...
Call it for what it is or we can pretend
Friends forever, we're together to the end...
A true love that fits like a glove
Is that too much to ask...
A skill I don't have but would be nice,
at this point my heart is cold as ice...
Friends forever, but lovers never.
Why not? I ask of my friend who is as beautiful as...
So many thoughts running through my head
Laying here in the dark alone in my bed...