Heey can people read and comment on my poems i will do the same
thanks

For once i smiled, but it quickly fades leaving behind a shattered heart because you walked away

I look up at the stars and for once youre not next to me looking at the same stars, god i miss you

Can you see the pain in my eyes now

When you left my life became and endless maze and im lost

Please read and comment on my poems i will do the same!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I guess the best things are said and written when u dont know their coming, like a kiss from ur boyfriend for no reason unexpected but full of feeling and emotion at just the right time

I dont care what happened before all I care about is here and now with yu

It's so easy for you to tell me what to do and what to say, But how can you tell me about something you know nothing about

Until you feel things the same way i do, shut your mouth and stop trying to "fix" what wasnt broken