Im 13 years old and i am into poems veryy much and i would like some feed back on how i am doing |
Your eyes remind me of the setting sun.
your lips move like your the only one...
While I'm here crying,
with my inside dying...
Live laugh learn is what i do.
i live to laugh and i learn to do...
I got the control.
i got the beat...
I feel your breath when you talk.
i hear your voice a mile away...
Diamonds aren't a girls best friend, the boys who give us them are. |