can you leave comments on my poems please n say if u like them n if u dont can u say how i could improve them?as it helps me with my writing tnxs......i added a pic of me but i had 2 make it so small i dnt think its gona look like me anymore! |
I remember how it used to be
when it was just you and me...
Staring into your eyes i realise
It's your face and your kiss...
I'm holding on as i slowly get pulled away
trying to fight through and remain here with you...
Falling, failing, floating away
i can't help but think I'm going insane...
Can you not see the lies written on my face
the mattered web of disgust and hate...
Can you not see the lies written on my face
the mattered web of disgust and hate...
I guess somethings just never change,
never end...
The tears just keep on falling
and i don't know why...
Falling, failing, floating away
i can't help but think I'm going insane...
You make me feel so special
just one moment with you is heaven...