Poetry pending people ... owie, that was a lot of ps.

Hi, Can someone please comment on my poetry? it sounds desperate I know, but I lost my muse because I thought no one on this site likes my stuff. so, if I am crap let me know .. if not let me know more! please?

I've lost my insperation!
have you seen him anywhere?

I don't care about tomorrow,
i've given up on yesterday

Kids in the back seat cause accidents!
.. accidents in the back seat cause kids!

not mine but i think its funny

What do rubix cubes and a penis have in common?
the longer you play with them the harder they get

Romance only exists in the movies, that way there isnt any broken hearts.

It doesnt just rain in life.. it pours!

One minute you want me back, but then im a liar. WTF?!

You'll only suffocate me again if i go back