Hi, Can someone please comment on my poetry? it sounds desperate I know, but I lost my muse because I thought no one on this site likes my stuff. so, if I am crap let me know .. if not let me know more! please?

My heart is like clockwork .. you dismantled me

If i guy suddenly finds another girlfriend two days after you break up he is doing one of two things
1)he cheated on you
2) hes so ugly he had to lie to make you feel bad

Pain is a figment of the imagination said the man who causes it

If times heals your problems
and makes it go away
how about the other 5,ooo i got
How much time will THAT take?

People tell you to think of yourself for a change and yet when you do you get called selfish!

Men are like roses watch out for the pricks!!!!

Its a fine line between being independant and just being lonely

My life is like a tunnel,
except this time there's no light

Whats the point in taking pride in the way I look? because when I do you just call me a slag!