Hi, my name's Ryan, I live in Toronto, and uh, I just thought this might be a good place to keep some of the poetry I've written over the past year. Hoping for some good feedback. |
Red in my eyes
in my ears...
When I look out the mirror I see the man in the...
And the man he says "hey let's go and...
When I look out the mirror I see the man in the...
And the man he says "hey let's go and...
Vunce zere vas a man a man
und he did like his pie his pie...
Drenched in sweat there's a room room full of eyes...
note - I wrote most of this in pencil on a pad of...
Red in my eyes
in my ears...
Looked out the window, pulled up the blinds
I can see it's a dark dark night...
Listen Ryan I know your wordplay is at its best when you're writing about dongs but nobody wants to read that. - Dan Hudson |