Hello, i from Malaysia and i an 20 years old, i begin to fall in love with poem, once i was bored at home, Do please comment on the poem i am writing, so i can improve myself on it....thank you! |
I once had a dream,
Happy and joyful dream...
2 years had past,
As the sun and moon passes by...
Earth consist of all humankind,
Both males and females...
Here's the story that i heard,
From an old friend of mine...
The time had come,
For my worst fear...
Losing a star doesn't mean anything, |
Think really hard before making a decision, because it may lead you to regret for eternity. |
The Flame of Love Burn Greatly At the starting Of Love, |