I'm a Unix systems analyst. I have been married since 02/08/2003 and have 3 beautiful daughters aged 12, 7 and 2. I play guitar, drums, ukulele and a bit of piano/keyboard. I admire those who write and believe that poetry is very personal. Poetry allows us to express emotions in different ways. Comments and votes are important, please feel free to say what you feel. STRUCTURED criticism helps everyone! |
My love I'll give you everything
The sun the moon and all the stars...
The howl of the wind,
The bite of winter's morning...
Placed in heaven, where time stands still
As I wait for you, our love still real...
From what had started
Now seems departed...
Like an elegant ray of light
Gently emerging from between...
Follow me, release your love,
Join me at love's Elysium...
Between finger and thumb
My love comes undone...