I would really like some feedback on my poems. It helps with writing future poems. Thanx a ton! |
Don't tell me not to cry,
When I just want to die...
I keep looking in all the places,
that you are supposed to be...
How do I tell you,
you are the reason...
I want you to feel the pain I do,
the breaking heart and aching soul...
My eyes are all out of cries,
and my heart is sick of the lies...
A friend forever,
He always helped her...
Do you remember,
many years ago...
I thought you would be there for me all along.
Standing next to me strong...
I love you Brad.
I want you oh so bad...
In my fantasy,
It's just you and me...
On my heart, your name is forever carved, |