I'm definitly getting better on my short poems, but my longer poems need a little help, so, please, comment and give me advice on my poems, thanks |
Tonight is the night, I just know it, the feeling...
Tonight is the night, I just know it, the feeling...
When the blood
Flows from my veins...
I wonder if
I had gone...
In the beginning
Love just needs...
As his hand
Reaches out for mine...
I feel no Love, no Joy, no Fear, no sorrow, I am hollow, and I shall live forever |
Lo popular ne es siempre lo mejor, lo mejor ne es siempre popular! ( what is popular isn't always good, what is good isn't always popular) |
When life gives you lemons, throw them at some one |