About David
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I like reading and writing poetry... all of my poems are just my thoughts so alot of them aren't good cause i haven't tried to make a structure... they kinda just come out like that... if you have any advice on how i could alter them to make them better would be great, other then that i can't describe myself by typing, so just read my stuff and if u like it great if u don't too bad |
Profile of David
- Age : 22
- Gender : Male
- Country : New Zealand
- Joined : Dec 22, 2004
- Last Visit : 1 year ago
- Poems : 19
- Comments : 54
- Quotes : 9
- Posts : 16
- Awards :
C
Featured Poems By David
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You left us with such a pain,
but a pain i can understand...
Latest Poems By David
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I look into your eyes
as you look into mine... -
You once said to me
i was the only one you loved... -
I offer you all my heart
you return it with unfaithful thoughts... -
Was meant to be a song...
to me you are a wild flower... -
To be alone
sometimes i feel...
Latest Quotes By David
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Deaths shadow is stalking me again
no running no hiding
i just sit waiting for him, and he waits for me
it seems i must suffer more before i can be free16 years ago0 0 -
I want to break my body to let the pain flow out
you ripped everything from inside me and replaced it with pain
a pain so unbreable that the only thing i want is to die16 years ago0 0 -
Finally the pain takes a hold of me, it has searched through my shields
the pain engulfs me, i can't with stand it16 years ago0 0