Please could some people look at some of my poems i would be really greatful thanks x-X-x

Cut the skin to the bone fall asleep all alone hear your voice in the dark
- Blink 182 :heres your letter

plz if you can read + comment on sum of ma poems it wud mean a lot 2 me

I kno most ppl r gonna hate me 4 puttin this up but if u cud hav a lk @ sum of my poems it would mean so much to me. thx in advance x-X-x

Ive shed blood
Ive shed tears
Ive shed sorrow
Ive shed fears
Ive shed sadness
Ive shed pain
But it's all been
My gain