Hi, I just started writing poems this year and most of them are inspired by my ex (well my ex ex, lol) b/f. I would really like for everyone to comment my poems and tell me what you think and how I could make the next ones better.. |
It really hurts to see you happy
and to know you don't care...
We had some good times
but that won't last forever...
I sit in my room and whisper your name,
under my breath...
I love you more than everything
you mean the world to me...
I thought this time was different
I thought you weren't the same...
Love is like a Merry-go-round; stay on long enough and you'll throw up! |
(-->TGIF- Thank God I'm Female!!! |
*~Don't end up hatin the one you love; and loving the one you hate~* |