Most of my poetry is story poems or poetry that only makes sense to me. Some of it is based on my life but the rest is all in my imagination. I would appreciate any critique on my entries so that I can become a better writer. |
The winter froze, that Moonless night.
Clouds of hot breath shimmered white...
It was a perfect pure burgundy
Seemingly thrown aside on the grave...
Scarred forever by Satan,
His Hell burned into my being...
Cold, lonely ember
Died out suddenly...
We are never bored, sitting in the zone
Falling asleep, talking on the phone...
I was a lonely cloudy day
And my sorry world was cold and grey...
Guilt is like the rain
Pouring from my eyes...
I cannot say that I was to blame
When you used our love like a little game...
Summer nights ending that gorgeous summer day,
Autumn starts and I think that I'm falling his...
I couldn't trust myself again
I never wanted you till then...
Follow your dreams, |
Love is like the ocean, |
We're standing so still yet we're moving all the time. |