Is this a one?

i'm sorry to sk this and everyting but i don't think its a 1, it might not be as good as my other poems but is it that bad?

'Seeing you'

Please leave comments, especially if you don't like it then i can work on it.

Erm rite well thanks so much for everyone who went to look at this. Tis now a 4 so thanks very much.