I love critiquing poems. Killer Of Time.

Didn't know if we were allowed to have more than one but I'd appreciate it if you could check out When Did You Stop Loving Me? at least for starters. Please and thank you

bloody circle and inspired by beethoven's moonlight sonata, please

im not sure if mine reach your requirments but thank you for the critique, its appreciated, though in some places, like my poem abandon you didnt understand parts that i though were obvisous, i guess that poem was more directed for myself and the person i love,... thanks again for looking into my poems