Katy
16 years ago
The gray sea and the long black land; |
Ray Smallshaw
16 years ago
-The poet you are critising is one of the greatest English poet to have lived. as for the use of and what planet are you on we are writing poetry so who says we can't use as many ands as we want and Brownings poem is so perfect as the lady says, it attracted her to attain his perfection and drew her into our ranks, good on her, he is loved by all poetry lovers all over the world. perhaps if you read more poetry yours will benefit? |
Ray Smallshaw
16 years ago
I was going to ask why but I can understand that perhaps by reading bad poetry you may find out were you are going wrong. I think you would be better off reading Browning and finding out what make him such a master of his trade (PoeT) By the way the poem is called "Meeting at Night", you will find it in most English poetry books, but I suggest you read "Parting at Morning", and "Any Wife to Any Husband though I suspect it may be a bit to long for you? |
Ray Smallshaw
16 years ago
This is a classic as is the follow up Parting At Morning, the words are gripping in their simplicity and descriptiveness and I feel his joy and anticipation as he makes his way to his assignation. |