Team 45 Friends

I was asked to write this poem for College, about my course and the people on it.

They are looking to have it finished and handed in by the end of the week. So if any one can give me some feedback as to whether it is of good standard it would be much appreciated.

I would of course repay the favour.

Nici.

It's listed in my featured part of my poems and called 'Team 45 Friends'.

Nici.

hey im looking at it now, ill be done and comment soon, ive already looked at some others too, i like them...youbelong on my favorites list..oh wait. you are

i read it and commented on it, and i made a suggestion, though it isnt important, just a matter of opinion, good poem