New Poem... [will return favour]

Hi =) I posted a new poem yesterday, called "Speeding". It's rather long compared to my others... umm any comments and ratings would be appreciated, and any constructive criticism is most welcome!

I will return the favour...

thank you in advance,
xx, PorteR

that poem is really good, really sad. great job

yea i checked out ur poem real good ... hopefully not a true story ... could u plz check any of mine

I just read your poem. Thank you for calling attention to it here.

I would suggest changing your message at the end to instead say that while the poem serves to point out the tragedy that can result from careless or inattentive driving, it is not based on your own personal experience. Omit all reference to anything suggesting that this is a bad poem. I don't know what gave you that idea. This ranks with your finest based on what I read.

I thought the poem was excellent and I am not easily impressed, especially with sad, sorrowful poems. Maybe you should do more of your writing after midnight. Lol!

I am posting my remarks here because they mostly relate to your above mentioned message. If you do choose to alter this message, my comments might be confusing to you poem's future readers.

Again, kudos for an excellent poem!

Thanks for taking your time out guys, it means loads to me! =) Thanks Lydia, i've done a couple of poems after midnight, and they seem to be near my best! Maybe i should make it a regular routine lol.

Ta guys... xx, PorteR

Very nice job on that poem. You have a talent most people on this site do not.