Cayce's >>first<< [t.i.t.l.e.d] contest.

Can i get just

Tongue Swollen with Lies

Taste this hate plz

Starring Down the Barrel of a Gun

The <> marks in front of sentences mean a person is speaking from the past. Just thought I'd put that in there. :].
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I remember telling you it was okay to cry, but you were ugly when doing it.

I've always said to myself, "Oh, what a wonderful world." Then I met you.

The tears on your face are speaking louder than you've spoken in years. Please, just take my hand. It's just another risk you'll have to be willing to take.

I know the mirror looks nothing like how you feel, but Baby, I'm the same way. And you have to realize that mirror can't see your soul like I can.

<How can you understand when I'm the one to blame? I make mistakes you don't know about.

The answer is: Yes, I'm insane,> You had pleaded with me; I remember the choke in your voice. Please, tell me those aren't tears . . .

<But that never mattered when I alone was the one to blame.>

You had said this with sadness and sarcasm in your voice. I also remember -- as brightly as the sun is shining now -- you had a glimmer in your eye like you thought I had been judging you.

//I'm not judging you now.
//You look beautiful.

I had smirked at those eyes at that time. That glimmer in your now noncontagious eyes had burned like a chemical fire, and I thought I'd never loose my smile. You then narrowed those dangerous eyes as if you were intimidating.

//You are now. And as if telling you could bring your breath back again -- I did loose that smile.

I remember those words like you had said them yesterday and maybe it was just yesterday. However, since you've left, the tears have never been the same. Somehow they're more bitter -- saltier, perhaps -- and they burn at the eyes. They're burning even now, as I take this hour glass back a bit.

<What's giving up if you're already lost?>

And as a quiet after thought:

<Some of us don't mind it, being lost.>

I wish I could have seen the real contemplation within your eyes. But I hadn't. Now, as I replay every aspect of your eyes in my head, I see it. I wish at that time I could have taught you how to sing . . . I've wished before I could teach the world to sing, but I always thought we'd all be out of tune. Now, I realize we're all just singing separate notes to a very minor chord.

You could have sang the world I taught you.

But you didn't.

Instead, you wrote lies on your paper, so simple and lined.
And then you sang:
"She puts the bullet right through her head ----

----it goes right through me."

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Can I be a pain and ask to change "The difference between love and lust" to "fallen from grace" please?

I just had a stroke of inspiration muahaha.

Em xXx

Fallen From Grace

She slithers across the grimy earth,
This is not where she belongs.
But now her destiny is to travel the world,
And sing her cold lonely song.

Low hollow tones and faint mournful words,
Flow from her mouth like black tears
That cascade slowly down her sallow ashen face
From eyes that brim with her fears.

This monstrosity of a spectre,
This ghastly gruesome presence
Was once a holy angel from up above
But now has a hostile essence.

She skulks in the shadows of times gone by
Bitter from her fall from grace.
White robe now crimson with the blood of her victims
Halo cannot be replaced.

She no longer guards heaven's white gates
But guards the gate to her past
Longing to forget how far she has fallen
So far that she is outcast.

No longer atop her fluffy white cloud
But dragging herself through the mire
No longer is she a hallowed guardian
Or something to which we aspire.

But a vile malevolent phantom
From whom all should back away
Wishing for her sins to be forgiven, redeemed
Alas here on the Earth she will stay.

Taste This Hate

Sugary sweet, it can't be beat.
Thrumming slowly throughout your heart, your soul.
Shredding you slowly, from inside, to out.
A burning ulcer you can't control.

Playing merry hell as you solemnly yell,
viciously rupturing your only sanity.
You shiver as they whisper, malicious thoughts crawling up your spine,
a once perfect life now oozing profanity.

The anger like a kiss of death, sparking with your every breath,
feeding the flames of a glorious fire.
Taste it, burning deep inside.
Chaos is waiting, a marvelous pyre.

Pigs may fly in paradise, but all you'll do is lie.
Let them feed, those parasites,
vampirous in your very destruction,
Hate in every bleeding bite.

I'm gonna have to unreserve. I have a writer's block and I can't write the poems. Sorry.

Ahh i posted my poem but i still got to edit it one sec

A Sinner's Perfect Plea

Take all of me
Every piece
Broken
Bruised
And dying

Loved
Held
Rejoiced
It's all there
Soaked into every bone

Every defeat
Every victory
Every moment
Ingrained into this being
Your creation

We
The seeds of your mind
Set upon this ball of confusion
Searching for our way home
Reborn

Forgiven
Embraced
Put to bed inside nirvana
Blanketed with comfort
This is why we call

Can i have...
"Fallen From Grace"
"Push Through The Pain"
and
"A Sinner's Perfect Plea"

Thanks!

Fallen From Grace
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She walks the streets
Lonely and cold
Bitter hatred she feels
Brought down hard on the stone

Time moves way to slow
Feels like being beaten by a whip
She has nothing to show
Nothing more than black eyes and split lips

Her dignity is gone
The confidence she once held
She feels like she has fallen
From the greatest things she felt

A husband who loved her
The way he made her feel
But every day he hit her
And struck her with a heel

But she has gone and left
She walks these streets alone
She has nowhere to rest
Sheâ??s too afraid to go home

She has nothing more
No more table clothes made of lace
Or even clothes to pick up off the floor
She realizes her mistake, she has fallen from grace

You forgot to put me under "Starring Down the Barrel of a Gun".. Or whatever it is.

Just thought I'd tell you. =].

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Strive for Imperfection

We'll never see, what's right under our nose.
We'll always chose to see whats wrong.
We'll break down, at problems, recently arose.
And we'll always choose to sing the bitter song.

Nobody will ever look, into the mirror,
and see themselves as they are.
See the good, the beautiful, all so much clearer.
Never again think of running afar.

Not one person, will step out of the box.
And do the unthinkable; strive for imperfection.
Automatically we'll think that every door locks.
Barely one will think of looking beyond a reflection.

Nobody will take the chance of stepping from the flow.
Using their own mind, taking a chance worth taking.
We all want to be remembered, and never mistaken.
Nobody wants to be forgotten or left alone.

After all why would you want to be someone else.
When you could just be better by being yourself.
Why pretend to be someone you are not.
When you have something they haven't got.

Cheating yourself of the life you have to live.
Deprives others of that only which you can give.
You have much more to offer by being just you.
Than walking around in someone else's shoes.

POLAROID

Can I plz have "just a jealous whore"
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PM me plz
thanks
xx

Here it is anyway hope its ok

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Just A Jealous Whore

You're just a jealous whore
Quit being such a bore

I just don't understand you
You're such a friggin' chore

You're just a jealous whore
You try to hit me in my core

Stop pushing my buttons baby
I could hit you to the floor

You're just a jealous whore
Get out my bloody door

You're gonna get something
I won't even count to four

You're just a jealous whore
Right down to every flaw

You like to screw up everything
And not do that much more

You're just a jealous whore
I swear I'll make you sore

You just want the man that's mine
But it's not you that he does adore

You're just a jealous whore
You think your so hardcore

Come over here & I'll set you straight
It's me who will settle the score

When Words Kill

Whispered sweetness decipher deceptions
within a dream pallid, in soft, scarlet tones-
lullabies lacerate destined sensations
outlined with zest of vivid, dancing shadows.

These notes are smeared with lilac's scent
unraveled between eager fingertips,
embedded into emerald, molten pupils
of the wordy demigods, coral demonic angels.

Letters weave intricate, engulfing creations
tailoring moons hanged over dirty windows,
mutilating mirrored silence with hands of steel
designed to merge with cryptic metaphors.

Baptized in a Pool of Blood

I dreamt of hollow dreams again-
an illusion of myself
nailed to a bloody wall of shame,
with the names written all over it,
names of silhouettes drenched in pain.

Sanguinary vividness leads the soul
through these pulsating towers;
mirroring mirrors mirror mirrors
suffocating each claustrophobic thought.

A curse was landed on this shore;
darkness consumed lovely silver
as remarkable chimeras laughed,
cloaked with liquor of pure ebony.

Captured by glow of Medusa's eyes,
secretly baptized in a pool of blood,
I was a wanderer with somber disguise,
a silent marionette of mirroring mirrors.

I dreamt of dreamless hollowness again,
some sagacity hidden between ardent bricks,
a key to a chamber where my soul lays
trapped in a box filled with nothingness.
I drank that clay moment from a dusty chalice.

Scarlet bridges burn within the mind
emitting shadows with every step I take;
mirroring mirrors mirror mirrors,
fusillading reflections on nightmarish streets.

Apparitions came to form a choir,
chanting my secrets along with fears;
incantations compliment depths of abysses
sketched across my heavy aura.

Captured by seductions of Medusa's eyes,
solemnly baptized in a pool of blood,
I was a wanderer with sinful disguise,
a slave to reflecting reflections.

Hey can i do The Difference Between Love and Lust. thankk you.

-THE DIFFRENCE BETWEEN LOVE & LUST-

The diffrence between love and lust.
In love, there is a little more trust.
Lust you dont really know if its true.
& in Love, you shouldnt ever be blue.
When ur in love it is such a deep connection.
you look in the water and see both of ur reflections.
theres no jealousy running through your veins.
and you dont ever have to pull in the reins.
Your in love, when u cant stop thinking about that person.
you have passionate moments that run through your head.
&& u dont have to worry about being lead.
Lust you dont really know.
if its real or if its just a foe.
&& that feeling you get when ur in love,
its something that has to be sent from above.
so the diffrence between love and lust.
is something your hearts gotta trust.

Strive for Imperfection

I will always try my best
To be true to who I am.
To be myself and no-one else,
And still not give a damn.

I'll wear my hair how I want to,
Won't pile on the blush every day.
I'll live my life how I think I should,
And do everything my own way.

I'll eat doughnuts if I feel like it,
Even if I put on a few pounds.
Sure I might not be size zero
And I'm not the one that guys hound.

My grades are good but not perfect,
You can call me a nerd or a geek.
I don't really mind what you think of me,
Whether you think I'm cool or a freak.

So long as I've got my honey,
And my family and my good friends,
I'll stay just the way I am for now,
And not conform to the trend.

If I'm fashionable it is coincidence,
If I'm trendy it's not with intent,
I don't want to be perfect,
And this is what some people resent.

They say that I could be a model,
That I'd make a good doctor or vet,
Don't get me wrong, those things would be great,
But I haven't decided quite yet

What I want to do with my life
Or who and what I should be,
So for now I'll go with what I think
And stick with just being me.

Offering Plates Full of Hate

Polymerization of two souls saturated with blood
is a bond of explosive emotions
framed with string of thoughts
which formed a spiral of instincts (or a whirlpool?)

This is adhesion above the translucent reflections
of something which people used to be,
but it leads to genesis of gushing architects
left on shape-shifting foundations of their future.

Offering plates full of love,
while aromas deceive the mind,
making that lying thoughts like -forever-
float through unprepared skull
-- bringing unstable felicity in eyes --

Constructers dreamt their visions
which mutually didn't concurred in one ;
offering plates full of incertitude
while one lungs can't respire without the sound of other breaths.

Two golden pieces of jigsaw aren't in the same size
so whole picture is discomposing while longings for north and south
splinter the heart in half
-they will took one and that is the only "forever"-
offering plates full of hate.

Baptized in a Pool of Blood

His spine is an arrow
and past cohere against the neck,
like a prick of injection-
pull the chain;
this metal is just another drop of ink
in narration of pain and screams
which is tattooed on his skin.

Animal shouts coming from the inside,
engendering earthquakes within
cupola of newfound thrust;
butterflies are, still, somehow bloodthirsty
in the eyes framed with iron signatures.

He rose, hitting the surface of the ground,
baptized in a pool of blood,
shredded identity is embedded in claws,
which searched for heart,
tearing the life apart,
transforming days in equipage of death.

A dot on preposterous fairytale
imposed theory of immobile saints.

Taste This Hate

Gritted dismay masked with smiles of imperfection,
I writhe to the beat of deceit in desolation.
Rage stitched in quiet nonentity of remembrance,
I scream to the bliss of embedded ignorance.

A mind that has lost all traces of solidity,
taken over or succumbed to the iris of elegy.
I dance to the sordid steps of blistered lovelorn,
amending a mindless decadent that has been born.

Fatuous eyes watches with synthetic sympathy,
as a heart marred with disappointment mourned heresy.
Bleak memories carved with abysmal tragedies,
ruptured the stagnant state of my untold oddities.

A wrath softened by the ample beauty of profanity,
replacing any traces of weakened touch in apathy.
Leaving this anatomy of a dementia unsaid,
realize your static sense and taste this hate.

Burning ice

Skin burns with ice of darkness
Heart mummers its last pace
When he hears whisper of death
He dies with no sound to trace

He cant speak, no words exist
The tongue of lies chokes his need,
Breath of ice smoke reflects
The buried seed of oblivion creed

The whispers are watered
The empty void begins to fall
He felt his shadow swallow him
Felt like he lost it all

Suffocate with the still ring
That hides behind avid ears
The sound of darkness
It is all to much to hear

He tries to hold on crows claw
To fly him away into his last haven
The lies burn as much as this ice
The ceiling cracks... His soul is caved in

CLOSED FOR JUDGING!!!!

Please be patient while I judge. I should have the results within a week or two.

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This was so hard for me to choose, so I got a little help picking the winners. Everyone did such a great job!

First place: When Words Kill - Beautiful Chaos
Second place: Of Tongue Swollen with Lies - xTheEcstasyofSuicidex
Third place: Blameless - firexdancerxgabriella

And because there were just so many I loved I'm going to give some honorable mentions [you will each get an extra comment].

Honorable Mentions:
Push Through the Pain - Teria Leeann
Blameless - Lonely Romeo
When Words Kill - NyellMoonlight
Baptized in a Pool of Blood - DarkSpirit

Please tell me which poems you would like me to comment and be patient. This will definitely take a while.

Congrats winners and honorable mentions these were all great I see y cayce got help picking

Good going everyone :)

Any titles would be fine, I have lots that need comments. Thanks so much.

Anything featured =) preferably new.

and congrats to everyone.

Well, thank you Cayce! I'm glad you liked it. =]]]].

If you want specific titles, I'll go through and look for some, but you're welcome to just pick through what you haven't done yet and choose the titles that best fit your mood. =].
Thanks, once again, and congradulations to everyone else as well.

xox.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Thank you very much!!!
please just pick any titles that catch your eye if that is okay with you.
:D
Congragulations everybody!

Congrats :]