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It's a free for all...

Rules

Must be new (as in written for this contest)
Spelling counts
Any topic
Any style
Any length (though if it's a novel it better hold my attention lol)
No more than 2 entries
No reserving, if you want in, get it in
Ends with 20 entries

*Prizes*

1st-5 comments
2nd-3 comments
3rd-2 comments

~Entries~

1~DarkSpirit
2~Damont
3~Leema
4~Paralyzed
5~Bob Shank
6~NyellMoonlight
7~The Tasteless
8~mRs SuNsHiiNe
9~NyellMoonlight
10~Jess
11~DarkSpirit
12~Hellon
13~MauLicioOosSs
14~charbel jamous
15~Jess
16~Mark
17~Jordon
18~Polaroid
19~charbel jamous
20~Unknown Soul

Good luck! I look forward to reading.

*Edit*

A Quest for Wandering

Dusty palms don't hide secrets,
so I have to seek for quotidian shadows,
-through the labyrinth-
hoping that fingers will, upline, stumble
and plunge in some substance
whose taste, undefined, hovered
between air barriers and avid pores.

I wander,
wander across engravings of recollection inwrought in glass
-with my magical breath-
Voice conquered attention,
which, instead of chaotic core's particle,
got announcement that now she sees,
that she won't pretend,
so, that is the end for both of us,
who even never existed.

But what that tells me?
Can I identify it with
cadence which protrude from reminiscence?
No,
because wandering brought me in the circle,
back to invisible balcony,
where I will send a shriek to the Goddess -calling out for dance-

My memory heart and soul
I remember the way she looked me in my eyes
and without words we would communicate
i remember when we would run around in towel capes
the times we shared i can't escape

my heart remembers the warmth of her hands
and the way it fell from her grasp like grains of sand
my heart remembers when it overflowed with pain
yet i fell for her all over again

my soul remembers the loving presence of her soul
the shared moments that seem would never fail
my soul remembers when we share one body
a time when nothing was held back

forgetting her i can't do that how can i forget my past?
my heart aches from being sad.
My eyes betray me with tears gone mad.
her memory tortures my soul keeping it contained.

one more chance i would die of heart break
our memories are bound with chains.
My heart is full of shame.
My soul is filled with blame.

Let me confess and the truth be told
she is my memory that i want back whole.
for her my heart turns cold.
And My soul is made for.

only she can correct all these flaws
She gives my memory wings so it can soar.
She makes my heart open its frozen doors.
And my soul returns to her never wanting more.

So you see she is the girl i will ever love
she is the reason i never said i love you more
i belong to her and our love can't be torn
I'm leaving now goodbye sorry for your scorn

It's Ok to Cry

I see tears welling in your eyes,
It is not a big surprise,
When I'm about to leave again,
About to get back on that plane,
To travel over miles of sea,
Which means that you can't be with me,
At least not for this little while,
Separated by four thousand miles.

It's ok, we'll make it through,
I promise that I won't leave you,
Don't be scared now, have no fear,
Just hold me close for the time I'm near.
I asked you if you ever cry,
I'm glad you said yes and didn't lie,
You always seem to cope so well,
If I didn't know you I couldn't tell
That you cry when you're alone,
It's something that you've never shown.

It's ok to cry because I'll always be here
To restore every smile and catch every tear,
Not too long now until I'm back for good,
To be in your arms just like I should.
Wipe away those tears that it's ok to cry
Because I'm coming home, there'll be no more goodbye.

Growing

Silence in the setting sun,
Liberty in a breeze,
Everything that sets you free,
Can bring you to your knees.

Family, friends, the ones you love,
Can lift you up so high,
When you fall, you lose it all,
A piece of you will die.

Loss of trust, surreal truths,
You never thought you'd know,
Can surface in the depths of life,
To drag you down below.

Kick and fight to reach the top,
Never just give in,
Lift your vision from the pain,
Build that strength within.

Perfect people don't exist,
For surely, we too, stumble,
And we can cause ourselves such pain,
Our world to fall and crumble.

Somewhere there's a balance,
We learn through time and change,
That life is never set in stone,
It's beautiful, yet strange.

So melt into the setting sun,
Soar into the breeze,
Think of something beautiful,
If you're thrown upon your knees.

Weeping Muse of Ardent Dusk

Amount of sleepless words tangled in my eyes,
complimenting panic goddess's deathly dance,
pressing tongue against poisoned impacts
of the cupola's tainted radiation;

Nocturnal crawlers laugh out of tune
highlighting illusions of purple wine-
I scatter paper hearts of bleak vanity
murmuring crucified, ghostlike rituals.

Once, a star was trapped within this cage,
breaking the chest instead of a heart,
introducing similarity to connected dots
aligned to represent carrier of fears.

I sipped some lies in your champagne
yet, swinging hypnosis blindfolded thy senses;
imagination's drinking amazement from a volcano,
succumbing to frigidity of amorphous tomorrows.

**New && Written for this contest :)

The Echo of Your Voice

The echo of your voice,
That stays inside of me.
It damages my heart,
Because it reminds me of you.

It's the echo of your voice,
That revives my every feeling.
It touches all my love,
And revolves around you.

When you call me without wanting,
It makes me cry.
With the echo of your voice,
I seem to forget everything.

With the echo of your voice,
It hammers down my heart.
A laughter to my pain,
You don't want anything.

Still the echo of your voice,
Doesn't let me live.
I can't seem to let you go,
Because I love you too much.

.:CiNdY LoPeZ:.
.:April 9, 2008:.

(My Second One)

Multiplying Rage

This battered, anguished heart
sings charcoal tunes of sorrow,
repulsive sweetened notes
designed to entice harmful mind.

Sacred wings of downfall are rising
to admit defeat under bleached moon.

These stinging, teary eyes
weave new visions of tartness;
liquefied phlegmatic thoughts
electrocute illusions in the process.

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Evanescence of the Sun (bloodthirsty revolution)

His name was...
whispered only in the moments
when blackness imagined that it is swallower of fire,
lost, lost,
dropped just then,
in ragged interpretation of hell.

And later he came back,
dragging his serpentine tail
from the maze of garbled recollection,
splintered in three parts,
then synthesized,
and dead,
then synthesized,
rendered,
forever,
eternally,
remanding me,
what my name could be.

Beyond repair, will you be entering something else?

Eversince We Met

Ever since we met...
ever since we strode hand-in-hand...
my heart has been crazy.
I found what love is all about.
in your eyes,
I have found paradise.
Under your tresses,
I have found a reason.
In your eyes, there is peace.
On your lips, is a smile.
You, I have made my love.
Ever since we met...
changed - is my life.
My heart has been crazy...
and I found what love is all about.
In blooming roses,
I look for you.
I don't know what comes over me
the sight of you
brings a smile on my lips.
God forbid! May we never part.

Ever since we met...
ever since we strode hand-in-hand...
my heart has been crazy...
and I found what love is all about.
I've gone crazy for you.
With out you, this poor heart
-of mine would stop beating
I've lost my peace,
But I have found my joys in you.
In you I have found a reason to live.

Ever since we met...
ever since we strode hand-in-hand...
my heart has been crazy...
and I found what love is all about.

~~~~An Imaginary Tale..~~~~

I SAY GOOD BYE!!

Good bye my love, good bye ,
no more tears , no more lie,
good bye my world, good bye
it is time , my soul will fly

good bye my sun, good bye,
no more light, in the sky,
good bye my soul ,good bye,
don't be sad ,happy i die,

good bye, i kiss, good bye,
from all my heart , good bye
my eyes on you , good bye
blessed are you , good bye

good bye , don't cry good bye ,
good bye, don't ask , no why,
good bye , my life i give,good bye,
i fade away , good bye,

good bye my love , ...i kiss good bye.
i leave this world , good bye ,
i leave a tear , good bye,
i leave you.... , good bye!

dedicated to my lost love!
15/04/2008

The neverending story

Through our eyes we see
and with our ears we hear
but the mind plays tricks
and will end with a tear

everyday the same
the morbid illusion of a world so sad
but is that really what is meant to be?
something so real it drives you mad?

cause imagination will forever stay
and we can only pray
for our Garden Of Eden to be felt
and for an eternity in our hearts to be held

An illusion of a perfect world
and my mind makes me feel
though I'm fast asleep
that this world is for real

but when night turns into day
and my eyes fall asleep
I will be cold and alone
and surrender to the deep

The Mist Loves Her Smile

Azure blue winks at mother nature
As a fine mist twirls, dances, atop the
Evergreen, evertall mothers and daughters
Eversentenced to carry out a rooted servitude.
Mother smiles and jeers the mist on,
Carrying the child's head in the
Crook of her nurturing yet aged
And somewhat harsh arms which,
Fit for any creature - delicate, newborn,
Also serve as a cradle for sun and moon alike...
Although they often snap at one another.
This night, unlike any other, displays pure love.
No other could suffice,
The gleam of the dearest's pearly whites
Is enough to send the mist into a flight of
Unmentioned but explicit delight,
Hopping, swirling, passing by the clouds, up and down, and
Finally nestling into a valley beneath the sky
Who, having been fine tuned from azure to pitch black,
Has no words for the children below other than an
Epic story, announced in the cosmos for all to see.

I've felt your piercing glare,
without even turning around.
I know what hides beneath your stare.
When you're looking at the ground.

You think you did nothing wrong.
How mistaken you are.
How can I begin to move along.
When you keep carrying on.

It may be that I'm the only one that hates you.
The others have no reason.
But don't think I don't belong, I can take a clue.
I'll be out of your hair by next season.

You can have everything then, you'll have won.
Don't you understand that I'm all alone.
I'm so sick and tired of what you've begun.
I won't stand for it much more.

And when you started crying,
understand you brought this on yourself,
Because as of this day, you no longer exist.

You brought it on yourself
POLAROID

Copyright (c) charbel jamous

i lye away at night
* i want to hold you tight

nothing can keep you , out of my mind
* i want to make you mine!!

i watch the sun goes down ,
* the world will stop go round

i want to keep you , inside my heart
* you have me in , from the start.

** oh my , pretty girl , i love you ,
* oh my pretty girl , i need you
i want you mine , you make me safe ,
i am right beside you**

i walk the crowded street ,
* hoping you i meet ,

let me see you , one more time
* you make me crazy in mind !

**this poem , is made for a song contest , and it been made a song , remember that after 4 lines , repeat the paragraph marked " **" hope you enjoy it **

BROKEN PROMISES...

Broken promises are all I have,
lost in a place where temptation never fades.
Yeah, I always thought you'd be true,
but everytime I just felt like a fool.

It wasn't the distance that made my heart ache,
it wasn't even what you said that made me break,
It wasn't even your actions that contradicted yourself,
It was beyond what I could explain myself...

Lost in a whisper of words so sweet,
this anonymous life once seemed so complete.
Dashed to pieces, but thrown against the wall,
who would've guessed how hard would be the fall.

Yeah, I'm kicking myself for the mistakes I made,
thinking back in the past that just never fades.
Yeah, I'm reliving my worst memories everyday,
hoping you'll show up again and say you do care.

But those three words just echo in my mind,
it's a door that remains open whenever I look behind.
"I love you" is what you had to say,
and you dissapeared the very next day.

I looked high and low for you,
hoping to find some kind of clue.
But you were nowhere to be found,
not even tiny memories wherein to surround.

Broken pieces can never mend,
the mistakes once made can never amend.
It's the face of people that's so hard to read,
it's desperation of life that leaves one in need.

Broken promises are all I have,
lost in a place where temptation never fades.
Yeah, I always thought you'd be true,
but everytime I just felt like a fool.

Darn it! I had a new one but ^^ made 20

good luck everyone!! =]

Thanks so much for everyone of your entries, it was hard to decide, but here are my top 3 picks:

1st~Jess

2nd~Hellon

3rd~Paralyzed

Please PM me titles you wish to have r/c/c'd or I will just pick random titles that catch my eye, i will try to have everyone done by the weekend.

Great job everyone :)

Congrats, all!

Congratulation all!!! nice contest !!

thank you