Twilight title contest (yes, the book)

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    1st=Sweet Blood-Paralyzed 10 r/r/c
    2nd=Sunlight-Panisa 8 r/r/c
    3rd=Twilight-SARA 5 r/r/c
    4th=A love like Edward and Bella-Bella 3 r/r/c

    It was a little hard to choose
    I loved reading everyone's poem
    Thank you so much for entering this contest
    ^.^

    ******CLOSED for judging*******

    RULES:
    1] NO explicit poems
    2] Only 3 poems per person, 5 poems per title
    3] If you choose a poem with the names of characters in it, please try to write it about that character.

    Prizes:
    1st-10 r/r/c
    2nd-8 r/r/c
    3rd-5 r/r/c
    4th-3 r/r/c

    Here are the title for anybody:
    Twilight
    -SARA (done)

    New Moon
    -SARA (done)

    Eclipse
    -NyellMoonlight (done)
    -Jade (done)

    Breaking Dawn
    -NinjaGirl (done)

    Wolf-girl
    -NyellMoonlight (done)
    -NinjaGirl (done)

    Sweet Blood
    -Paralyzed (done)

    Sunlight
    -Panisa (done)

    Can't Live Without You
    -robin milford (done)
    -Imcute17 (done)
    -NinjaGirl (done)

    She talks in her sleep
    -NyellMoonlight (done)
    -robin milford (done)
    -Melpomene (done)

    Here are the titles for reader's of the book(s)

    A love like Bella and Edward
    -Bella (done)

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Wolf-girl, Eclipse and She talks in her sleep;

    Thanks :)

  • aDORKable x3
    16 years ago

    Can't live without you
    The line you can't cross

    love this series!!

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Wolf-Girl

    An amount of uncanny elusiveness,
    just a particle that once contained nudity,
    trapped within decaying heart
    that sealed the door of our ardent kingdom.

    Therefore, I was
    a wolf-girl,
    put the weapons down
    at the end of this beginning,
    bathing within the heat
    slipped from your serpentine tongue.

    A pair of scales and a telescope-
    the tale of sharing and analyzing
    ready to begin;
    ancient voices sung me a lullaby.

    An amount of derelict sanity,
    just a self-created bedlam,
    smeared across your sky,
    ready to detonate.

    Therefore, I was,
    a wolf girl,
    an entity
    of dead freedom.

  • Paralyzed
    16 years ago

    Sweet Blood please

  • Paralyzed
    16 years ago

    Sweet Blood

    Dripping, red and true,
    Sweet and sticky lust,
    I revel in the madness,
    Others in disgust.

    Veins so blue and beautiful,
    Feeding me your sea,
    Everything you ever wanted,
    Flowing into me.

    Dreams so crisp and clear,
    Hopes to shape a soul,
    Fears you thought forgotten,
    Now in my control.

    My sweetest child, reborn in sin,
    Hallowed be thy name,
    Immortal whispers on the wind,
    You'll never be the same.

    The sun will rise and we shall sleep,
    Like stars, we shine at night,
    The life you've known, now left behind,
    Bathed in soft twilight.

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    YES!! the first few people.

  • Beautifully Disfigured
    16 years ago

    New Moon plz

  • robin milford
    16 years ago

    Can't live with out you plz and also "She talks in her sleep"

  • robin milford
    16 years ago

    Can't live with out you

    We were unstoppable,
    Inseparable
    That all came to a halt,
    Or so I thought
    Sometimes two hearts
    Just can't dance to the same beat
    And grow apart
    This was us
    Or so I assumed
    I moved on, I thought
    But apparently not
    The day I heard your plan
    I wept like a baby
    Threw a total tantrum
    The thought of you with her
    Wedding bells ringing
    Awakened me
    "I can't live with out you"

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Eclipse

    Do not question my faith-

    the one that embedded a detonator
    into your silver, weeping moon,
    remembers
    all those nightmares
    that were translated into pure madness.

    Promises fade between bleeding stars,
    the sky's burning, shiny scars
    that testify about the times when we had gods.

    Some notes never played
    haunt phlegmatic tendencies
    turning the hourglasses,
    ancient remains
    within this digital mechanism.

    Now, when the history merged
    with the world's eclipse,
    do not question my faith.

  • robin milford
    16 years ago

    She talks in her sleep

    Her sweet whispers
    convey no lies
    late at night
    in the twilight
    She confesses all
    in her slumber
    She thinks I'm unwise
    to her blatant lies
    For she knows not
    that in the night she spills all
    We don't brawl
    cause in the day light
    I don't dwell on her wrongs
    but on her rights
    I don't keep track of the number
    for if I did I'd bawl

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    Ok so every time I come back to update the posts I'm going to add a comment; that way I don't get confused, I'll know exactly which ones I haven't added/updated yet. Just wanted to tell the moderaters this, I hope I'm not breaking any rules by doing so.

  • Beautifully Disfigured
    16 years ago

    Can i also get "Hunter" thx

  • Alexandra Jade Brewer
    16 years ago

    A love like Bella and Edward
    Eclipse
    Sweet Blood

    Please :)

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    Yay! more people! lol I think just for the heck of it (since this is moving so slow) I might give it a try. I just won't count mine when I judge

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    "She Talks In Her Sleep"

    Please and thanks.

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    She Talks In Her Sleep

    Tranquil darts dance within eye lids of color,
    Licking blue veins which caress burning pupils,
    Dream catches tear as demons ignite lullabies,
    Drenching vulnerable lips within emerald venom.

    She talks in her sleep igniting feathers alight,
    Pulled on a string while tasting scarlett fruit,
    Poisoned within desires of a painted world war,
    Fighting off the fireballs intoxicating her tongue.

    Zig zagged star hearts bite brittle broken lines,
    As shards of violet glass rest upon floor boards,
    Tossing then turning entwined with cotton sheets,
    Demons choke lullabies for she talks in her sleep.

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    I kinda wish i could change the title to vampire/love or something. Not as many people are interested as I thought would be.

  • sibyllene
    16 years ago

    I'll try to write one for "The Meadow." : )

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    Ok, good luck! ^.^

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    She Talks in her Sleep

    Delusive voices scream bloody lullaby
    as her world slips from the sky,
    stopping to stare at the ceiling
    ornamented with abstract voodoo.

    Illusive birds decipher inner notes
    trapped in empty cages of broken symphony;
    these murmuring phoenixes lick her tears
    smudging misery across liquefying pupils.

    Inflamed delirium personifies demons,
    sketching their obscure wings
    drenched with sweetened, fragrant venoms.
    Unfolding dreams inhale malediction.

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Can i please reserve

    Breaking Dawn

    and

    Wolf-Girl

    thanks

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Wolf-girl

    She runs so swift and silent
    Through the forests and hills,
    She scrapes the snow with her tail
    And is deadly with her kills,

    Her teeth are long and sharp
    Her nails could tear you through
    Her growl is a dangerous echo in the night
    Her fierce stance a definite fright,

    But during the day, it's who she becomes
    That got her her name,
    She is the wolf-girl
    Wolf at night,
    Girl during day.

    ©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Breaking Dawn

    The dark has long stained my sight
    I've seen only a moonless night
    Only known black, not white
    Known no joy, only fright.

    The dark has forever been here
    It hasn't just moved in from near
    It gives me the strength to fear
    And the strength to cry even a single tear.

    The dark has always stood here, cold and forlorn
    But now that I know true love
    To open my eyes, i have the strength
    To view this beautifully breaking dawn,,

    Love conquers all.

    ©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    I'm glad there are finally some more entries. Maybe I should take out some of the ones that are empty. The deadline remains the same for now. Good luck everyone and I hope to see some more entries. ^.^

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Please reserve as well,

    can't live without you

    thanks! :)

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Can't Live Without You

    Softly dying
    In a world of
    Negative thoughts
    And injustice.

    A love
    That cannot be
    For the words of one
    Who won't
    Try
    To change.

    I have found
    That I tend to
    Be in love,
    Just like I
    Breathe,
    As often though
    I die as one,
    Alone,
    In a winters' paradise,
    A snowflake tranquility.

    I can't live without you,
    Or I will die
    Once more.

    ~Dedicated to Daimon~

    ©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

  • Nawa
    16 years ago

    Twilight please

  • Nawa
    16 years ago

    Twilight

    (This poem is like conversation between Edward and Bella, it starts with Bella and then Edward and so on)

    I still recall the first time our eyes locked
    The world has vanished, time froze , and you stole my breath
    Mesmerized I was , dazzled by your effect
    My heart accelerated throbbing against my chest
    My body went numb and I have known that I have fallen deeply in love ...

    You knocked my world and altered the universe
    Through your scent I have begun to live
    And with your heart my blood has pumped
    It was hard I must admit
    You've awaken the thirst that have strived to be held
    But through it all you made it worth
    Your heart of gold is what I adore ...

    Your smile is alluring and so is your voice...
    The blush on your face drives me insane and so does every word you say...

    I cant describe this feeling I have never felt this way ...
    I am just as clueless, for you I have only prayed...

    I never believed in fairy tales, they always seemed cliche
    But now I know they are true for my prince you have came...

    I am no prince but I hold some magic
    I am a sinful monster straight from you nightmare
    But still I long to be the one to share your happy ending
    I promise to love you and keep you safe
    Where no fate will ever take you away
    With my eternal kiss forever you shall stay
    In the twilight of my endless days...

    Your no monster, your my angel
    My life and my reason
    My strength and my weakness
    Take my soul it is already yours
    I don't care about this world
    With you is where I belong...

    Without you my life was like a moonless night
    And then you shot across my sky and made it shine
    Now I am blinded by your unwavering beauty
    And forever in debt for your trust and faith..

    You speak of my life and described my existence
    For that is how I am with and without you
    I am blinded by your light and your infallible grace
    And I know that no one can ever take your place...

    Your hold is permanent and unbreakable
    And though am not safe
    I know that I'll never be strong enough to let go
    So I ask you love to look after my heart for am keeping it with you...

  • Nawa
    16 years ago

    I think I could change my title to " A Love Like Edward and Bella" its fits since there are no entries for twilight.

  • Nawa
    16 years ago

    I think I could change my title to " A Love Like Edward and Bella" its fits since there are no entries for twilight.

  • Sarah
    16 years ago

    Forever in twilight

    by SARA

    Don't come near me, you might get burned
    Don't speak to me, you might get hurt
    Don't listen to me, I'm cursed

    I am pure danger, surrounded by flames and desire..
    A cold blooded heart that will never beat again..

    Don't look inside, you might find the prisoner I hide..
    you'll see a fragile needy heart shattered and left aside
    behind the prison bars his heart has built..
    I am lying to believe that I once lived..
    doubtfulness & distrust..
    Oh how I long and yearn for you touch..
    Your warm blood shall end this thirst
    I'll drink till I satisfy my lust,
    or I shall die to end this must.

    .........

    Your words I shall never hear
    I came to you with no fear
    come to me, settle here
    Then I'll never shed a tear..

    What you say Is not what you feel.
    Your lust might be real,
    But your love will appeal.
    I love you, please don't leave..

    * Dedicated to Edward & Bella..(Twilight).

  • Sarah
    16 years ago

    The End of a New Moon

    by SARA

    A sorrowful mist sprinkled around
    a quiet place it now become
    the sound of sweet showers echoed in silence
    butterflies and bees played a hushed symphony
    a celebration will soon take place a
    A new moon will appear tonight,
    setting a new beginning
    ending another chapter of life
    Everything was magical almost heavenly mystical

    There ,in the middle of it all, I stand..

    Time froze and I've lost track
    Trembling I was, yet not able to make a sound
    Eyes so sore and dry
    fiercely gasping air
    longing for what's not there

    One voice echoed inside..
    '' It'll be like I never existed ''
    How can he say that..?

    All of a sudden, it became dark
    the trees are huge and high
    silence took over the place
    I am scared and vulnerable
    I am sinking.. Unwillingly I am fading
    It all have to end here and now
    If existence is what you'll take,
    then I'll nor seek to exist

    I hold my heart in my hand
    A mournful cry failed to escape my land
    I surrender to the overwhelming power,
    knowing I've lost my battle
    Though I love you, I'll let go
    I'll never fulfill thy desire...

    Dedicated to Edward & Bella (New Moon)

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    I admit that I forgot about this. I'm sending messages to all the unsubmitted poems. I might give them a while to submit. I'll start judging and then consider the ones I recieve (if any) to see if they beat the ones I've chosen. (don't know if that makes sense but whatever)

    Thanks for waiting on me!!
    I'm really really sorry I forgot.

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    Eclipse
    by Jade
    (copied over to the thread by me to make it easier to judge)

    Walking side by side in a darkened field
    They whispered words only they could hear
    There harmonizing voice sang together
    Telling each other about each and every fear

    A howl was heard, yet it was far off in the distance
    In unison shivers ran down each spine
    Reaching for each others hand they knew
    That they could never cross that line

    But that field; it was all so right
    They gave into the temptation that haunted all night
    Under the canopy of that old oak tree
    They crossed all boundaries hidden from sight

    The passion you'd sware caused the grass to glow.
    From the embers created by all of their heat
    That wolf howled the song they would always remember
    Keeping in time with some wild beat

    Holding each other when all was complete
    They knew they'd fixed the others tears and rips
    That night was for only them to remember
    Lost in the darkness of the new moons eclipse

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    Results are up!!!!

  • Paralyzed
    16 years ago

    Thanks for the placing! Great work everyone.