NinjaGirl's First Contest - YAY

**********CLOSED FOR JUDGING**********

Rules:

* It must be new
* No explicit stuff
* Must reserve beforehand
* Any style/length
* 2 titles per person
* 4 poems per titles
* Due Date: 20 June
* HAVE FUN!!!!

~Titles~

Your Eyes
- damont *DONE*
- Paralyzed *DONE*
- Dante *DONE*
- Liquid Sugar *DONE*

Miracles
- Singing In The Rain *DONE*

Cold Words
- Singing In The Rain *DONE*

Where Worlds Must Meet
- NyellMoonlight *DONE*

Starless Night
- Crashing Landing In A Home Near You *DONE*

Crimson Hearts
- Crashing Landing In A Home Near You *DONE*

Portrait
- NyellMoonlight *DONE*
- Dominique Beard *DONE*

Stairway To Love
- Imcute17 *DONE*
- Dante *DONE*

PRIZES:

1st- 10 comments
2nd- 8 comments
3rd- 6 comments
4th- 4 comments
5th- 2 comments

ALSO -

You Will Receive A Comment On Each Piece You Submit

PM me to ask questions

Good Luck!!! :)

Reserve: Where Worlds Must Meet & Portrait :)

Hmmm lol umm Starless Night And Crimson Hearts please thx =P

Where Worlds Must Meet

Basically,
ideas overwhelmed the night,
waving
in front of the confused fog's
face;
- Let it be-
moistened streets
caressed by the fingertips
of darkened dreams
slept,
tonight,
when silver threads unravel
paintings without canvas,
passer buys without faces,
and a woman without heart.

Where worlds must meet-
cracked mirror
midnight kiss,
loveless gaze,
pouring rain.

Basically,
grayness evolved
following
cloudy highways,
lurking behind the festal gargoyle's
grin;
-Let it live,
let it breathe
let it feel
sky's heartbeats-

Where worlds must meet-
shattered letters,
nocturnal whisper,
wordless prayers,
pouring rain.

Starless Night

These Cold Nights
Are Eating Me Alive,
Wont You Stay
To Keep Me Warm
Tonight.

While I Stare;
The Sky Falls Around Me,
But You Still,
Are Not There.
And While I Waltz
Through The Ballroom
Full Of Twinkling Wonders,
My Mind Returns To You.
Gently And Slowly,
One By One They,
Began To Blink Out.

Frozen I Stood,
On The Marble Floor.

I Awoke.
Seeing The Last
Of Them Blink
and Fade Away,
Like The Insistent Noise
Of The Monitor
Next To Me.
Everything Left Me.
And Again I Found Myself
In That Wonderous Hall
Of The Starless Night.
All The Time Looking,
For A Mere Glimpse
Of Your Face

Can I please have:

Lying Your Way Through Love

&&

Starless Nights?

Thanks..

I'll have cold words and miracles. Thanks!

I would like to rsvp for your eyes

Your Eyes please

Your Eyes

I remember those blue-green pools,
So fierce, yet tranquil,
Perfect for drowning,
A smile forever on the lips.

In these depths,
Words were not needed,
A thought, a feeling,
So easily read and absorbed.

I remember the day I saw nothing,
No dark, no light,
Just an abyss of emptiness,
No words were needed then either.

They still haunt me,
Your eyes,
Those ghostly pools that held everything,
Then nothing.

I wonder if you have seen that emptiness,
If those eyes still haunt you,
If the colour lay as vibrant in your memories,
As it does mine.

Portrait

Spectral seconds
laugh backwards
echoing with damnation
planted within sinful minds;

I have a picture to burn:
Frozen dreams
of vivid warmth
drown
our carnal whispers.

Reality is just a portrait
framed with shadows,
painted in black and white
ornamented
with bleeding thunderstorms.

Spectral seconds
sing out of tune,
mocking futility
of our mordant kisses.

Please reserve

your eyes

&&

Stairway to love

thanks.

Dante

Plz reserve " lying your way through love"

Thankx so much

O and i'll also have "portrait"

" Portrait "

One teenage girl
Pulls up to her home
And she steps out of the car
Looking to find no one
Two Open toed-heels sauntered
In the puddles beneath her
She came to meet the door
And grabs for her key
Watching over her shoulder
She knows she was being watched
She had snuck out to a party
Earlier that night
For her parents had not known
She'd now entered her home
And sprinted up the stairs
For she had gotten away with
Her diabolical plan
She sits on her bed
And kicked off her shoes
She inhaled her deep breath
Like she'd practiced in yoga
For now she was calmed
And her thoughts roamed away
She has now slipped into her nighties
And was headed to her bed
But when realization had came
She head for her lavatory
This was located by just a few steps
For she had been drinking that night
And noticed it was still on her breath
The door creeks as she returns
She has finished brushing her teeth
But has attempted to avoid looking up
For every mirror has reflection
She had hated her reflection
It reminded her of "it"
For she was not an ugly person
In fact she could show up Beyonce'
Her straight blonde locks
Which were curly from the party
Her sky blue eyes
Which were hazel from her contacts
Her pink plump lips
Those were cracked from her drinking
To her Tampa Bay tan skin
That all her friends killed for
She was quite popular at school
There's was no doubt about it
But her mirror, her mirror, her mirror
Didn't care about all that jazz
It didn't care about her rich parents
Or her sliver Lexus
All that matter was who she was
Her mirror didn't show it
And she couldn't find it anywhere
She was lost in her own reflection
Screaming for a way out
She tries to find herself in who she is
Guiding her down the wrong path
He follows her everywhere

*This is a made up story about a girl who acts very stuck up and [uppedy] but really doesn't know who she is deep down inside*

Hey, could I please have

Your eyes

&

Portrait?

Cheers xo

Stairway To Love

I take your hand
I let you lead me
Where do we walk my one and only?
Do you guide me upwards to love
Or down into despair
As we walk our souls reach out to touch for the first time
That first emotional embrace of happiness and passion
We become but shadows of light
Shades of brightness radiating from our souls
And upwards do we ascend
Upon golden stairs
To our hearts paradise

Your Eyes

My darling I can lose myself within your emerald eyes
Yet deeper do I look within you till I start to cry
For I see internally your hearts torment for me
Those windows to your soul have shown me what you truly see
Just for you to glance at me cuts deeply into you
For your heart aches with your need for me
Just as mine does for you
We hunger for each other just as we hunger for breath
For both of us without each other
We walk a life of death

All poems that have not been submitted have to be submitted by tomorrow and the contest will be judged in the days following

Crimson Hearts

Lies and deciet,
Anger and
The hatred that fills you now;
She turned,
And kissed me goodbye.
Some deny it,
But I wont this time.
This hurts.
But youll live
Sometimes I wish
I was alive.

So turn and kiss me again,
We'll live forever tonight
In that moment.

In your eyes I see the anger
Grow and grow
But still I wonder.

Who could burn
And stay as cold as you?
Im just another pile of ashes
In your way.
Come back tomorrow;
Cause like a pheonix,
I'll rise out of those ashes
And fly away.

I'll bear my crimson heart,
And the horrors I've seen.
No longer pinned to my shoulder
Locked away in a safe
Never to see the other.

Damont.
burning eyes.

As i look into your eyes

all i saw was the sun rise

it became as if i got lost in a black hole

your eyes became the coal for that fire which couldn't even be contained

as i stare in your eyes and yours into mine

our love grows and becomes entwined

i feel so happy and my eyes open to the realization of a dream

which has just become reality

a fear just came over me

to lose you is to lose all that i know

so i will hold on tight

holding back things that are right

to keep you here with me

as i feel your gaze through the burning night

Cold Words

As I round the corner of the halls,
I hear the popular group talking,
My feet stop right in their tracks,
And I move so I will not be seen.

My breathing becomes quiet,
As my ears listen attentively,
They are laughing at someone,
But who are they doing it to?

Then I hear my name said in disgust,
And my mouth drops open in shock,
What have I ever done to them,
Do they really think I deserve this?

"You know what I heard about her?"
Oh, no this can't be happening,
"She seriously did that? What a jerk!"
Why can't they stop telling rumors?

Anger and hurt rush through my body,
And my face becomes a flushed red,
They think anyone who isn't like them,
Has no importance whatsoever.

"She has to be the ugliest girl alive,"
My heart becomes wounded,
"Why is she here? She is so worthless!"
My breathing almost stops.

Their mean words stab and pierce my heart,
But I know what they say isn't true,
How can words have such a horrible affect,
And make you feel like a speck of dust?

I need to escape this horrible nightmare,
Before I hear them say any worse,
I have to run away this second,
Away from their cold words.

Miracles

What would happen if the sun never came up in the morning,
And if we never had that warmth, that nice pleasure, again?
What if rain, sweet wet rain, never fell down from the sky at all,
And we never felt that pure moisture fall upon our heads?

What would happen if pretty lilacs and lilies never bloomed,
And their wonderful, sweet-smelling scent, was never released?
What if snowflakes, pure and white, didn't fall on the ground,
And we couldn't make snow angels and sled upon it?

What would happen if the dazzling moon never came,
And it never lit up the night, dark and black, not even once?
What if the stars, so bright, never shone their beauty for anyone,
And we could never lie on our backs watching them twinkle?

What a poor and miserable world it would be,
If these things never appeared and existed.
For our world surely needs all of these blessings,
These truly remarkable God-given miracles.

Your Eyes

I see a lonely boy looking for hope
And a longing love for someone
I see the tears he had to cry
As he cried long nights for his special one

I see the truth and lies
The anger but also a smile
In hope he had found her
Even if he waited for a while

I see this and much much more
On the outside though you look fine
But I can see within your eyes
What do you see in mine?

Also
Can I unreserve Portrait?

CLOSED FOR JUDGING. PLEASE, EVERYONE, DO NOT POST ANY MORE POEMS AS I WILL IGNORE THEM BECAUSE THEY WEREN'T POSTED IN ON TIME.

thanks for understanding.

results will be posted as soon as i've gone through all the poems.

Ok, everyone, results are in and here they are:

1st- 10 comments - Prince of Sam - Starless Night

2nd- 8 comments - Singing in the Rain - Miracles

3rd- 6 comments - NyellMoonlight - Where Worlds Must Meet

4th- 4 comments - Dawn aka Dominique - Portrait

5th- 2 comments - Dante - Stairway To Love

thanks to all who participated, i enjoyed every poem immensely, so it was hard to decide the results :)

Thank you!

Plz do:
Backwards
It's Just A Contribution
More Than A Friend
All Out Of Love