My Second Title Contest [[any genre]]

CLOSED. JUDGING.
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[[PRIZES]]
1ST PLACE {{5 COMMENTS + ADD TO MY FAVORITE AUTHORS}}

2ND PLACE {{3 COMMENTS + POEM ADDED TO MY FAVORITE POEMS}}

3RD PLACE {{3 COMMENTS}}

I'll take I'm tired of this game and Can you hear me?

Please reserve

Imperfection

&&

I Am Second to None

please and thanks in advance

Imperfection

Flawless skin,
Hazel eyes,
A flawless imperfection
Drowning in stone
Cold lies.

Soul that bears no mark,
Heart that bears one name
And bandaged up so much,
Scars and break
To remain.

Hazel eyes
Spill tears,
First sign of true emotion,
She has waded all these years
Through seas of true devotion.

But the anguish
Of it all,
Makes her break,
Makes her hurt
And fall.

Calming seas,
Soft silk breeze,
Drying eyes
And pain filled cries.

A flawless imperfection
Drowning in her love and hate,
To die alone, and lonely,
It is but lovers' fate.

~Dedicated to Daimon~

©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

Can I reserve can you hear me?

I would like to have can you hear me?

Thanks in advance! :)

"Imperfection", please. :)

Can You Hear Me?

Can you hear me, I'm calling,
Don't you care that I am falling?
Right now I'm down in this dark hole,
I feel like I'm losing complete control.

Still here waiting just for you,
Do you know what I'm going through?
Darkness is creeping slowly inside,
I don't know how much longer I can hide.

Soon I must get out on my own,
And face the world all alone.
I need your guidance and advice,
Do I really have to ask you twice?

So can you hear my desperate plead,
Of how much I am truly in need?
All I want is a good and real friend,
Someone who stays with me till the end.

But you have proved to be nothing like that,
Instead, you are a selfish and know-it-all brat.
You said you didn't have time for me,
And was to busy to help with my plea.

So I will move on in life trying to survive,
Hoping to be successful and to thrive.
I will never be able to forget you at all
And how you never did hear my call.

Wow, really good titles... It was hard to pick
Though... Can I please reserve
I Can Hear You Calling
&
This is the Last Time

Cheers xo

This is the Last Time

I wipe away my own tears
And being haunted by my fears
I live this life every single day
And happy thoughts are kept at bay

This is the last time I'll fall
The last time I let pain call
It can't and it wont get me
I'll run so far so it I cant see

This is the last time I'll cry
Even if I am to die if I try
I shall be out of death's hold
And I shall be free from the cold

However, I've said this before
And after that, I fell to the floor
If its the last time for such things for me
Then sure enough, its the death of me

TM - LiquidSugar

I Can Hear You Calling

In a place deeper then bliss
Is where I await deaths kiss
I hear him outside my door
As I lay broken on the floor

I shed no tear, I know my fate
I knew from that very date
It was going to happen anyway
So why keep bad thoughts at bay

So I lay my head back down
And sure enough happiness drowns
But as I feel death's weapon drop
I can hear you calling, and I want death to stop

TM - LiquidSugar

Can I reserve "Imperfection?" Thanks!

Sean Dohr

~Imperfection~

A relationship bound by the court,
two parents yearning to abort.
One child's postpartum deport,
a life, from the start, out of sorts.

The help of two elders, they sought,
a custody battle, never fought.
Drug addict parents, got caught,
important lessons, never taught.

A baby that was left behind,
consequences of a legal bind.
A lifestyle of a different kind,
viewpoints from a distorted mind.

A family separated by years in time,
a life with a different rhythm and rhyme.
Two people, making up for another's crime,
always living off of their last dime.

A difficult situation from the start,
a unique picture, of an unpopular art.
A family, nearly torn apart,
two grandparents, certainly, off the charts.

An unwanted boy, now full grown,
held together by seams, left un-sewn.
Approaching life with a whole different tone,
hoping, some day, to live life on his own.

~Sean Dohr~

Can I reserve "I Am Second To None?" Thanks!

Sean Dohr

~I Am Second To None~

When I die, I will not be placed beside my pen,
nor will my soul dwindle on this petty earth.
Both will rise, one in glory, the other in fame,
and all will share in my everlasting mirth.

To my dirge, pen strokes will do a final dance,
words that kept me afloat, will no longer wade.
In death, profundity shall be enhanced,
yet I will be forgotten, as the ink eventually fades.

The portrait of my life, painted with caliginous words,
will be placed upon my headstone, in a grassy heap.
Forever I'll lay somber, where I've been interred,
for what in life I've sowed, I shall eternally reap.

Blenching pages will not outlive this web I've woven,
within these pages my heart is willingly expelled.
Never will fame surmount the ties of this poetic brethren,
nor will death seperate me from the bonds I've withheld.

~Sean Dohr~

I Can Hear You Calling please

I Could Wish For Better please

I Could Wish For Better

I'd never ask for anything,
That wasn't mine to take,
Prideful in my wicked ways,
Sleeping or awake.

I'd never say a single word,
I didn't really mean,
Words, the most important thing,
The truth is so serene.

I'll never cry a single day,
For love that I have lost,
If I held it and still failed,
That lesson is my cost.

I'll never fail to let you know,
The feelings I surmise,
And even when you doubt it all,
You'll see it in my eyes.

I could wish for better things,
Life forever altered,
I'd rather have the things I've earned,
Even when I've faltered.

Can I reserve:
can you hold onto my heart?

Can you hold onto my heart:
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I welcome in the morning breeze,
I welcome in the sun,
A new day lies ahead of me,
I'm out to have some fun,

A new chance to follow my dreams,
A new chance to explore,
The fantasy I've had for years,
The idea I adore,

If I leave remember me,
If I leave don't dart,
because I'll be coming back,
can you hold onto my heart,

It wont fit in my pocket,
It wont fit in my chest,
So can you keep it safe for me,
And not just do your best,

I dont want to find a broken heart,
I dont want to have to grieve,
So will you still have love for me,
Even after I leave?

PLease reserve SECOND TO NONE

This is the last time && tired of this game please

This Is The Last Time

{And like a fool I went so blindly back into your arms}

Longing to hear those words you used to whisper to me
Instead every thirty seconds you just repeat her name
Those three words that I'm dying to hear reserved for her
What happened to all the things you used to proclaim

Mumbling softly that you still and always will love me
So why is it she who's wrapped up in your embrace
Are you conflicted or playing more of your many games
Cause I see now that I was easy for you to replace

{Yet when you said you still love me, I followed you so trustingly}

Pretending I'm okay with just being friends is killing me
Completely unaware of how just the mention of her hurts
And if you're just playing more head trips maybe one day
I'll love you a little less to help you get your just desserts

'Cause at the moment seems I can't bring myself to hate you
Even after all the confusion, misery and countless tears
Love you more than I could have ever thought was possible
Yet after our time together left with a broken heart as a souvenir

{And I've been thinking...maybe it's time to show I'm stronger}

So I guess what I'm trying to say is it's time to choose
For even though the time we spend together is sublime
Have to face up to what maybe reality, I'm just your game
The time to believe your words has come for the last time

Tired Of This Game

We used to be the very best of friends
Made that childhood pact of friends forever
Only if I'm to be quite honest with you
Don't think we're meant to be together

Now where to start with all the drama
It's like you get of on causing hurt
So tell me, now I'm a little curious
Do you treat all your friends like dirt?

Or is that just reserved for me only
Spreading all those rumors and lies
What is it that you actually want from me
You'll be disappointed if it's to see me cry

'cause I've finally taken to much grief
And guess what, now I'm giving in
People keep asking what happened to us
And I never even know where to begin

I'm tired of all your spiteful words
Sick of all those lies you spread
Fed up with your petty jealousy
Time to go find another friend instead

'Cause when I needed you the most
You were suddenly nowhere around
So salt my wounds a little more honey
You're the best friend who can't be found

And Reserve THis is the Last time Thank you

I Am Second To None
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Hands frozen to a frosted window
Like a wet tongue hanging from a pole-
Dressed in white like a bride-to-be
Upon a broken pedestal.

"A black smoke rolled from the East
Like millions of flies set loose from Hell"

My eyes grew larger as the sun darkened;
Apollo fell from the sky-
Landed in a crash that set the grass ablaze
And birds flew to every corner.

The flies gobbled them up one by one
And charged at my limp face
Sometimes leaving a smudge upon the frost
As a brown haunting print.

"The window broke from their force
Her dress faded from white to black"

All the hopes and dreams from long ago
Spilled forth from the table of ruin
And all the gold shining trophies and happy photos
Ripped into pieces until nothing

...As I am second to none...

This is the Last Time
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When the next moon rises above your trees
Or the next rain splatters upon or steps-
It'll be the last time I ask for your expertise
Or waste away life for a life you dreamed.

This is the last--the final thrash from me
When this finger reaches the door.
Call me loser for giving up my hopes
But this is all yours and I want no more.

This is the last time I will take the spotlight
And play my song for wicked fame
And fall prey to the clapping strangers
Whom are nameless and all the same.

When you hear the slamming of your door
or your windows shattering like ice.
I'm gone and never coming back again
Never to pay for fame's unrelenting price.

When the photos hanging neatly on your walls
Fall like an avalanche and slice the ground
It'll be the last time I cry alone in the night
Wishing my spirit could again be found.

This is the last time--the final straw
The very edge before I tilt...
I'm fading, I'm leaving...I'm gone.

Can I change mine?
I want Fill Me Up, Make Me Whole instead.

Imperfection
by KindlyUnspoken

Your words floated onto paper with such elegant ease,
As I struggled with my thoughts, subdued by a purple haze.
Transfixed, I watch as flowers bloomed before me,
I'd lost the ability to differentiate between each passing day.

Punishing myself for not being as good, as perfect;
That little green demon arising in me once again.
Your work: a morning sunrise, everybody sees it,
Mine withers away as soon as I reach for the pen.

You said I was amazing, my talent glowing beyond the rest,
But not even your words could make me see
'cause when I read the art that comes from you,
I knew it was the kind of perfect that I could never be.

BloodDrop... i think you are in the wrong topic

I will have to un-reserve "I Am Second To None"

How's the judging going?

I am sooooo sorry that I have not posted the winners yet. I have been out of town for like a month adn could only get online for a few minutes at a time. I have the winners I just need to unpack and find my notebook!

WINNERS WILL BE POSTED TOMORROW!!! BY 11:59 PM PACIFIC TIME! AUGUST 8!

{{1ST PLACE}} xPinkDizzyTeacupx - This is the Last Time

{{2ND PLACE}} Sean Dohr - Imperfection

{{3RD PLACE}} NoniWang - This is the Last Time

All winners please make sure the poem you won with is on your account. I will be commenting on those first, then moving on to other poems. PM me if you have any special requests, also PM me when the poem is on your account. C=