~ Smiles For Alex ~ another contest

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    16 years ago

    * CLOSED FOR JUDGING *

    Ok, never done this before but the titles will be the UK top 10 at the moment.

    ~Titles~

    Singin' In The Rain
    1. NinjaGirl {Done}

    Take A Bow
    1. NinjaGirl {Done}
    2. PrayerForPeace {Done}

    That's Not My Name
    2. xPinkDizzyTeac upx {Done}

    Warwick Avenue
    1. Austin {Done}

    Closer
    1. NinjaGirl {Done}
    2. Breathing Death {Done}

    Love Song
    1. Sean Dohr {Done}
    2. Briana Coulter {Done}

    Sweet About Me
    1. lil ash {Done}

    Black & Gold
    2. Dark Secrets {Done}

    Heartbreaker
    1. xPinkDizzyTeac upx {Done}

    CLOSED FOR JUDGING

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    Black & Gold and That's Not My Name

    Thanks :)

  • Sean Dohr
    16 years ago

    Can I reserve "Love Song" please? Thanks!

  • Sean Dohr
    16 years ago

    ~Love Song~

    (Verse 1)
    My desires are beguiling,
    a fabrication of the truth.
    The lies are all compiling,
    escaping from the sleuth.

    (Chorus)
    Can run, but cannot hide,
    with every passing stride,
    I die a little more inside,
    my passion won't subside.

    (Verse 2)
    My efforts are misleading,
    misdirected by my lust.
    Yet, you'll find me pleading,
    to gain eternal trust.

    (Verse 3)
    Bonds will soon be broken,
    I will not play the tease.
    Words I've left unspoken,
    will now come out with ease.

    (Chorus)
    Can run, but cannot hide,
    with every passing stride,
    I die a little more inside,
    my passion won't subside.

    (Verse 4)
    Words that I've bestowed,
    now will be relinquished.
    My hearts been overflowed,
    with things I can't distinguish.

    (Verse 5)
    Ties with loosened ends,
    will soon settle in my hands.
    With each agonizing bend,
    I loosen the last strand.

    (Chorus)
    Can run, but cannot hide,
    with every passing stride,
    I die a little more inside,
    my passion won't subside,
    my passion won't subside.

    ~Sean Dohr~

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    That's not my name && heartbreaker please

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Please reserve,

    "singin' in the rain",

    "closer"

    &&

    "take a bow"

    thanks in advance!! :)

  • Lemonbread
    16 years ago

    Could I please reserve 4 minutes?

  • Dark Secrets
    16 years ago

    I want Black and Gold... thanx

  • Dark Secrets
    16 years ago

    Black and Gold

    Window sill of my life ahead
    Drawn upon black parchment
    It sooths me to say I bled
    Upon that paper till it blackened

    A lonely feeling encounters my heart
    Darkness is where I belong
    Feeding on the fears hidden in a tart
    Delicious poison disguised in crimson desires

    Solid rocks stand in my way, pointy and slant
    Bringing me down to a crash in each try
    Beneath the hardened pavement a plant
    Grows shining golden rays of hope

    Surging muscles form gracious smiles
    Unknown prosperity heeding forth
    Happy events attract rainbow piles
    Not all in this world is dark and cold

    Sprinkle on my black parchment shrouded
    Golden glitter covers memories of dismal
    Opening a page optimistically clouded
    Life lies beneath the mist of Black and Gold

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    "Love Song", please?

    Thanks.

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    "Love Song"

    I listen to those love songs,
    the ones on the radio.
    Memories of happier times,
    make my heart sink low.

    I hear those love songs,
    they kill me inside.
    Forever I'll miss you,
    because I left when you died.

    I sing along to those love songs,
    the words are sweet.
    Soon we'll be together,
    once again our hearts will meet.

    I remember those love songs,
    because they remind me of you.
    My one and only true love,
    and your true love, too.

    Not a day has gone by,
    that I've not had those thoughts.
    Everything that I know,
    is everything you taught.

    So here's to those love songs,
    the ones that I listen to.
    They've helped me decide,
    I need to be with you.

    Briana Coulter
    06/18/08

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    Just wondering -- Have you decided on a deadline yet..?

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Alex, I'm sorry if I suck...was difficult to write for me :/

    That's Not My Name

    {And you mention her name..mention her yet again}

    Funny how I've come to realize lies spill easily from your lips
    You've got cheating and betrayal down to such a fine art
    Yet I can't help falling for you more each passing day
    Even though you've proved you don't deserve my heart

    Helpless everytime you sweep me into your embrace
    Even though I know I should try to keep my distance
    But finding it so difficult, never felt this way before
    This confusion is killing me, this repeated persistence

    {Now you're with someone new..another name to remember}

    Every new girl you get, still manage to fool me into your bed
    After each and everytime promise myself I'll be strong
    Beginning to hate you for all the pain you're causing me
    Yet simuanouesly feeling in your arms is where I belong

    One girl, two, three, the number clearly makes no difference
    We're all the same to you, just more toys to carelessly discard
    Though I know this deep down still fall for your snake like charm
    Promised me forever, but my feelings you just casually disregard

    {After how many you play with...do you even remember my name?}

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Again, sorry if I suck..

    Heartbreaker (Triolet)

    So easily decieved by the charm in your baby blue eyes
    Only now I know I've fallen for another decietful heartbreaker
    You're gonna be the cause of my sudden early demise
    So easily decieved by the charm in your baby blue eyes
    You're just love's devil in another angelic disguise
    Never would have guessed you're just another faker
    So easily decieved by the charm in your baby blue eyes
    Only now I know I've fallen for another decietful heartbreaker

    *Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
    repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
    letters representing the repeated lines.

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    16 years ago

    Deadline is 30th July :)

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Closer

    Never spoken a word,
    Only shared a glance,
    Never told a secret,
    Only taken chance,

    School days go so fast,
    Rehearsals, even quicker,
    I wanted the show to last,
    Just to watch you sing Mika,

    But wishes don't come true,
    Until luck has come your way,
    And this week was my lucky week,
    I can now gladly say,

    In a day or two, everything just changed,
    Suddenly we were closer, in so many ways...

    I smiled at you, you smiled at me,
    We text each other constantly...

    Got a few things sorted out,
    Like feelings and such,
    But you'll never know
    That I love you so much...

    Because the crowds began to disperse
    And the shows were at an end,
    And we may never see each other,
    Ever again...

    The rain suddenly fell
    From the clouds in the sky
    And I decided they were weeping,
    For us, they did cry...

    *

    Because everything is suddenly over,
    And we're closer then before,
    Only, we're a little further apart...
    Stretching the limit of a breaking heart...

    ~ This poem was written after a show that I'm in called Gangshow finished. The guy I really, really liked went there, so this poem means a lot to me...

    Stanza 1: we never actually talked face to face, instead we communicated by exchanging glances on random occasions, and we didn't tell secrets to each other and then we took the chance to know each other...

    Stanza 2: the rehearsals started in about March and it only seems like yesterday that I first took a proper look at him... and he had to sing the first lines of 'lollypop' by Mika, that was cute as until the girls started fighting over him -.- ...

    Stanza 3: none of my wishes or dreams ever came true, but I got lucky this week, I won an Oscar on Sunday 13th July, and then on Wednesday 16th he asked his younger sister for my number and text me.

    Stanza 4: we text each other heaps and got to know each other a bit more, even though we still hadn't spoken in person, we were suddenly closer

    Stanza 5: we kind of looked at each other a lot and we text absolutely all day

    Stanza 6: we sorted out our feelings, well, kind of... he knew I had a crush on him, but he wanted to know why. So that was sorted out. But he would never know how much, because gangshow was beginning to end.

    Stanza 7: the show was in its final week, and he wasn't sure if he was coming back next year.

    Stanza 8: it rained a bit in the last few days...

    Stanza 9: everything was over, but we're closer then before because we are going to meet up this weekend, but we're further apart because we won't see each other as much, and it really does stretch the limits...

    For Matt ~

    ©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

  • Lil Ash
    16 years ago

    Sweet About Me :)

  • Lil Ash
    16 years ago

    Sweet and sour
    strength and power
    love and hate
    Mess and state
    smile and frowns
    funny and clowns
    Happy and sad
    Nice and bad
    jump and run
    smiles and fun
    brave and scare
    Tickle and laugh
    Dinner and tea
    Cant you all see there is nothing sweet about me <3

  • Lil Ash
    16 years ago

    Sos Can i do mine again pls :) That one is crap

  • Lil Ash
    16 years ago

    This is My better on :)

    Sweet About Me :) By Ashleigh

    Look at me and what do you see,
    Lovable, affectionate a golden key.
    But deep inside I'm devious and Vicious,
    But sadly my parents want me to be ambitious.

    I try to be nice But i just cant help it,
    I'm alway hopping i will never sit.
    People would ask me leap in a fire,
    I would do just to be admired.

    I might get a tattoo on the top of my head,
    Mum declared if i did so id be dead.
    Or maybe a belly ring thats 10 carrot gold,
    Last time i ordered one of them mum got it sold.

    Think ill steal some money to buy a new water gun,
    Not that that would be amazingly fun.
    Mums revolting boyfriend is coming for tea,
    Ill make it that he will never forget me.

    All that lovey dovey girlie stuff yuck,
    I through all my sisters make-up in the muck.
    Mum bought me a new dress the other day,
    Last time i wore a dress was last may.

    Rock and roll thumping in my room,
    Mum will Stomp up the stairs soon.
    Just remember the little golden key
    But deep down theres nothing sweet about me

    MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-Does evil Laugh >:)

  • Austin
    16 years ago

    I'll take Warwick Avenue.

  • Austin
    16 years ago

    Warwick Avenue

    I hope you like it!

    Whose homes these are I wish I knew.
    They hold my love however shrew.
    The homes are falling very fast.
    They fall on Warwick Avenue.
    I have been searching for a year
    And my quest has ended here.
    I've murdered almost half the town
    Only hoping you are near.
    Love you are my shining crown
    Without you I would surely drown.
    I spilled the blood of all the men
    That stole you while you wore your gown.

    Love I found you once again.
    And was chilled by your pale skin.
    I kissed you on your gorgeous face.
    "Love, it's time to leave this place."

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Singin' In The Rain

    Singin' in the rain,
    Dancing as if insane,
    Pretending there is no hurt
    For I understood your words.

    Singin' in the downpour,
    Crawling over floorboards,
    Falling over concrete truths,
    Attempting innocence and youth.

    Singin' in the streets,
    Muddy puddles at my feet,
    The reflection of a horrible girl,
    Maybe the truths will unfurl...

    Looking past the murky water,
    Maybe it's only the words we thought of...
    Maybe the truths will unfurl,
    That, maybe, you really are my world...

    Singin' in the downpour,
    Always crawling across the floor,
    Tripping over hidden facts;
    It's only strength and love we lack...

    Singin' in the rain,
    Dying from the pain,
    Walking, numb, over concrete,
    Where, once, we would dance,
    In the streets...

    ~Like a lost memory~

    ©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Take A Bow

    The crowd cheers,
    You come up fast,
    Smiling, waving,
    And the moment lasts.

    You walk and prance,
    You swagger and sing,
    A dirty lil dancer,
    Not such a good thing.

    He walks up behind you,
    He smiles and waves,
    The crowd roars,
    He's the latest new craze.

    You walk and you scowl,
    With scorn upon your face,
    You don't show your feelings,
    You dance on, unfazed.

    He starts a dance,
    Of jazz and hip hop,
    His sexy fast moves,
    Force you to stop.

    He smiles sweetly,
    And you realize with shame,
    That you have been beaten,
    At your very own game.

    You flash a smile,
    And take a bow,
    Because you're not wanted
    Here right now.

    ©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    16 years ago

    CLOSED FOR JUDGING

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    16 years ago

    1. xLittleMissDit zyx - Thats Not My Name

    2. NinjaGirl - Closer

    3. Dark Secrets - Black And Gold

    4. Austin - Warwick Avenue

    5. Briana Coulter - Love Song

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    Yippee! Thanks.

    Congrats to everyoneeee.
    :]

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Wow, what a surprise!! Thank you, lots and lots and congratulations to everyone else :)