Need criticism?

I'd be happy to tell you what I think of your poems I love reading other peoples work...theres a lot of great poets out there....I dont have too many comments and votes myself so if you like my work comment and rate it....every peom I see a comment on I will comment on one in return....ex you comment on 3 of mine you get 3 comments...made sense? lol....Just woke up so not in the best frame of mind....anyways i would like to hear what you guys think....I won't be on all day so if you would like to talk to me via msngr just add me on yahoo or msn J_Girl892007@yahoo.com or m4ttzb4byg1rl@hotmail.com thanks for your time guys, I appreciate it Much Love, JJ