Another title contest

CONTEST CLOSED!

ACCEPTING NO MORE POSTS

~*~rules~*~
1. only one person per title (please reserve)
2. no use of the f word allowed
3. must be at least 12 lines
4. obviously, it must relate to the title
5. can be old or new, but you must use my title

~*~titles~*~
1. i can see eternity in your eyes [(reserved)]
2. broken reflections [(reserved)]
3. always together, no matter how far apart [(finished)]
4. hidden demons [(finished)]
5. life lessons [(reserved)]
6. how do you know when... [(void)]
7. silent screams [(finished)]
8. when everything changes [(reserved)]
9. confessions [(reserved)]
10. mask of perfection [(reserved)]

~*~prizes~*~
1st--a place in my favorites and 6 comments and votes on poems of your choice.
2nd--4 comments and votes on poems of your choice
3rd--2 comments and votes on poems of your choice.

all--comments and votes on the poem you entered

Silent Screams

My exterior is so quite while my insides scream
Just thinking about it makes it hard to breath
To hold my tongue sometimes I grind my teeth
To down right lie and not say what I mean

My mind races with things I cant or wont say
You know its true and you like it that way
It builds and builds and even now it grows
I've had up to here and down to my toes
I couldn't go another day with out unleashing
All the anger and pain I hold within me

Every single time you talk to me I think the same thing
Another straw on the camels back how much more can you bring?
Cause these shoulders are broad but they have there limits
You push your luck in hopes you can lay down in it
You push my buttons cause you know a girl I'll never hit
But more and more each day I give less of a shit

My exterior is so quite while my insides scream
Just thinking about it makes it hard to breath
To hold my tongue sometimes I grind my teeth
To down right lie and not say what I mean

I wish I could replay some of the stupid shit you say
The mindless games you play, every single day
I swear to god you say these things to piss me off
You run my patience dry every time you talk

You think by now you would have gotten the hint
You had your fun while I clearly didn't
I'm down right sick of it, I've had enough of this
You messed around and now I'm beyond pissed

My exterior is so quite while my insides scream
Just thinking about it makes it hard to breath
To hold my tongue sometimes I grind my teeth
To down right lie and not say what I mean

Hidden Demons please

Could i please reserve

"i can see eternity in your eyes" ??

thanks in advance :)

"when everything changes"
please))

Oops
nevermind

Hi, I'll have Confessions please.
:)

Mask of perfection

When all titles are reserved, u have 2 weeks to post ur poem.

i appologize for not stating that in the beginning. i knew i was forgetting something.

Erhm...

maybe you could write the names of the poets nect to the titles, so that we know who reserved them.

- Mark

I'll have life lessons please! :)

Hidden Demons

Deep inside,
The darkest place,
Where fear is born and bred,

A demon hunts,
And will not stop,
Until its will is fed.

Dreamers dream,
But you do not,
Haunted through the night,

Soaked in sweat,
You're all alone,
Praying for the light.

The suns sweet kiss,
Upon your skin,
Sure that you're alive,

In the shadows,
Never known,
If this time you'll survive.

You run so far,
Gone so long,
Find the pain still there,

For everything,
You wish to leave,
Is trapped inside your stare.

Lonely eyes,
Tortured soul,
A mind that cannot see,

You have to face,
What weighs you down,
In order to be free.

When everything changes

Hey, look
In front of you there is a book
It's opened on a new blank page
As everything in life is gonna change.

You hold
A book that gets written as you grow old
And every page, and line, and every word
Is up to you, is up to any choice you got.

The wind
Blows tenderly the pages, and you read
The words to never fade with time
The words to describe your lifeline

And now
You wonder, what is next, and how
To make a choice you won't regret
And not to lose what you already had.

Just turn
The page, it's time you learn
It's not a tragedy when everything changes,
It's just your hand writing on new blank pages.

Mask of Perfection
by Mark
Genre: Dark

Her spirit surrounds us
the glow of her heart
no lack in her smile
no tears to be seen

freedom she brings
pure love she gives
her soft skin, her brown eyes
like an angel walking the earth

this pretty little girl
with her golden hair
staring at people
while building a lair

a place for a creature
a beast from hell
waiting for the perfect time
to brake out of it's shell

two different persons
lies withing her big brown eyes
we can only count the days
before one of them dies...

Life Lessons

I still make a lot of mistakes,
Ones that I can't just simply erase,
I know I must learn from them all,
And keep getting up whenever I fall.

When I really get stuck in my life,
And have to decide what is morally right,
I take a moment to sit down and pray,
To shed some light upon my hard day.

Life won't go on forever and ever,
So you must live it fully and be clever,
Don't hate and despise one another,
But instead love and forgive each other.

NO MORE POSTS ACCEPTED!

i'll get around to judging as soon as possible.

for the people who didn't post ur poem, i'm sorry, u've been disqualified since u didn't make the deadline.

for the rest of u, good luck.

RESULTS!!!!!

1st place--Paralyzed
2nd place--Mark
3rd place--Singing in the Rain

i loved all of your poems. this was a very hard decision for me. congrats to the 3 who placed. please send me the poems you want read in a message, and i'll read them as soon as i get a chance.

and, if the poem you entered is an older poem, please tell me so it will make it easier to find. and if the title is different on your page please tell me.

S-i-L-E-N-T S-c-R-E-A-M-S

My Entire Core and Senses are Cursed
In Attic of my Skull Whispers Silently Screaming

Driving me Crazy, am i gonna Burst?
Abomination and Hatred i am filled with is Shrieking

i Crawl Towards the Questions
Like a wounded Ghoul Pleading for Mercy

Losing my Strength and Faith once i fancied
Lying in the Cradle of Sins unguilty

As a Phoenix i Reincarnates but more Filthy
Traitors twisting their Daggers deeper in my Back

and the blood Slithering in my Veins Feels a smoke
Death is Near, Whispering in my Ear

i Beg for a chance, but no one dares to Hear
Trembling i stand my Eyes filled with Tears

Suffering immortal Pain and the Ultimate Fear
i Drop to the Hard ground Losing my hold

Creeping Weak and embarrassed of my Own Soul
So embarrassed to Beg my Own Lord!

Ok.....^ 1. the contest is over. 2. even if it wasn't over, that title was already taken so you would have been disqualified anyways.

ok, i'm sorry that it's taking me longer than expected to get to your poems. please be patient, i'll get to them as soon as possible. i'm sorry, i have a lot going on right now, but i promise to get to your poems.