Ninja Titles - WOOT!!

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Rules:

    * It must be new
    * No explicit stuff
    * Must reserve beforehand
    * Any style/length
    * 3 titles per person
    * 4 poems per title
    * Due Date: Undecided
    * HAVE FUN!!!!

    ~Titles~

    Every Colour Of The Rainbow
    - LiquidSugar
    - Lizaveta *DONE*
    - MauLiciOuSss
    - XxFarxFromxPer fectionxX

    Love Comes In Shapes And Sizes
    -
    -
    -
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    I'm So Over You
    - Leap Of Faith aka Temps *DONE*
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    My Guardian Angel
    - Bella
    - Valet Every Wish *DONE*
    - Lil Ash
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    Beyond The Realms Of Reality
    - KennY
    - Lizaveta
    - Heir to the Lost Poets
    - Cayce *DONE*

    Love Isn't Imaginary
    - Leap Of Faith aka Temps *DONE*
    - MauLiciOuSss *DONE*
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    If You Look Harder You Might See...
    - Arisen *DONE*
    - PrayerForPeace
    - Leap Of Faith aka Temps *DONE*
    - xLittleMissDitzyx

    Invisible Chains Around My Heart
    - PrayerForPeace *DONE*
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    It Hurts To Remember You
    - xLittleMissDitzyx *DONE*
    - hidintalent
    - Lizaveta *DONE*
    - XxFarxFromxPer fectionxX *DONE*

    If It Was Yours...
    - LiquidSugar *DONE*
    - Rachel *DONE*
    - LiliLoser
    - Lonely Romeo

    Chance My Love
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    Paint It Black
    - A Phine To Sour skittles
    - xLittleMissDitzyx *DONE*
    - Sweet Fragility *DONE*
    - Taylor *DONE*

    Change My Heart
    - Briana Coulter *DONE*
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    Colour My Love
    - Briana Coulter *DONE*
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    World Of Our Own
    - Briana Coulter *DONE*
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    PRIZES:

    1st- 10 comments
    2nd- 8 comments
    3rd- 6 comments
    4th- 4 comments
    5th- 2 comments

    ALSO -

    You Will Receive A Comment On Each Piece You Submit

    PM me to ask questions

    Good Luck!!! :)

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    "World Of Our Own", & "Colour My Love", please.

    Thanks.

    =]

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    "Colour My Love"
    By: Briana Coulter

    Colour my love,
    and make it blue.
    Like the ocean & the sea,
    and your eyes so true.

    Colour my love,
    and make it green.
    Like the grass & the stems,
    and everything we could've seen.

    Colour my love,
    and make it pink.
    Like the hearts & the flowers,
    and the beauty won't shrink.

    Colour my love,
    and make it yellow.
    Like the stars & the sun,
    and everything that keeps us mellow.

    Colour my love,
    and make it yours.
    I open my mouth,
    and out my love for you pours.

    Colour my love,
    and don't make it stop.
    For I have a list,
    and you're at the top.

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    CAn I have "Beyond the Realms of Reality" please? ^^,

  • adriaan
    16 years ago

    Can I have "If you look harder you might just see"?

  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    -I'm So Over You
    -Love Isn't Imaginary
    -If You Look Harder You Might See

    =) I'd love to reserve these, please.

  • adriaan
    16 years ago

    Alright I've got mine:

    "If You Look Harder You Might See"

    Blessed is the creature
    Who strangles their ignorance not in vanity
    Cursed is thee
    For your scorn of a sacrilege
    I'll give you a sign
    I'll give you a warning
    For the path to be unbroken there must be nothing which is blind
    For you to progress further you can not destroy your past

    So innocent
    So pure
    One day you'll see again
    One day your hand will touch the sky
    And you'll never feel the stars

    So vile
    So cold
    One night you'll feel again
    One full moon's night you'll murder the raven
    And you'll laugh your cry to the world

    You'll scream
    And change
    When you know there's nothing more
    When you hear the sound of Gaia dying
    You'll wish you'd changed your mind

    Come
    You've learnt
    You've learnt to see the truth
    The path to darkness welcomes us
    This lovely summer's day

    It's time
    To kill
    It's time to feed again
    It's time to look deeper
    Deeper than your soul
    When you can hear your heartbeat
    When you can feel your bones
    When you can smell the burning of your flesh
    Then you know you're getting close

    Perhaps now, you can see
    What you were meant to be

    When it is time again
    You will join us
    You will join us in the obliteration of this species
    When you touch the sky and break it down
    Look beyond and you will know

    Beyond the dying suns of your planet
    Asymmetric with the stars
    The liche's kiss awakens thee
    To awareness of afar
    Where creatures cursed by hate
    Persist to seal our fate
    Until you see
    And believe

    In a new living world
    And a soul to nurture it

    Perhaps
    It might help
    If you look a little bit harder...
    ...but it's getting harder to see
    harder to feel
    harder to live
    and easier to d i e

    If you want to die so much
    try not to take the world with you
    give us what's left of your eyes
    eyes to see, not to look

    your eyes
    your eyes still can't see
    they can look at what's in front of them
    but nothing more than that
    your eyes
    you shouldn't use them
    you should use something else

    Where you're going, you won't need eyes
    Give us your eyes
    Give us your eyes, fool
    Give us your eyes

    Or perhaps...
    ...you might want to use them
    You'd better hurry
    The sun's dying
    It's killing you
    Your skin's peeling off your body
    Hurry, now
    Hurry

    Let's find out if you really can see

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Paint it black && it hurts to remember you, please

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    "World Of Our Own"
    By: Briana Coulter

    Sometimes I feel,
    as though I'm alone.
    But then I realize,
    we're lost in a world of our own.

    I try so hard,
    but I cannot win.
    So I try once more,
    and again & again.

    I can't give up,
    that's not my style.
    Even if I know,
    I must fake my smile.

    I won't be broken,
    you won't do it to me.
    I'll be okay,
    just wait & see.

    My life will go on,
    even without you.
    Read my words carefully,
    because they're all true.

    Sometimes I feel,
    as though I'm alone.
    But then I realize,
    we're lost in a world of our own.

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    OOH! & can I have "Change My Heart", pleaseeee?
    =]

  • Moose
    16 years ago

    It hurts to remember you please

  • Nawa
    16 years ago

    My Guardian Angel please

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    "Change My Heart"
    By: Briana Coulter

    You beat me down,
    tore me apart.
    Now I'm gone,
    & I won't change my heart.

    You can beg & plead,
    & you can say you love me.
    I've made my decision,
    whole-heartedly.

    You can say you'll never forget me,
    and tell me you need this.
    Too bad for you,
    you're everything I don't miss.

    I've moved on,
    please do the same.
    I thought it would work,
    but the relationship was lame.

    I can't take this,
    not anymore.
    There's no possible way,
    I'll be coming back for more.

    Now that it's over,
    I'm glad we're apart.
    I've met someone new,
    and I won't change my heart.

  • Lemonbread
    16 years ago

    Could I please reserve
    Every Colour Of The Rainbow
    And
    If It Was Yours?

    Cheers xo

  • Lemonbread
    16 years ago

    It It Was Yours

    If it was yours, would you take my hand
    And guide me as my audacious savior
    Staying by my side, without a second thought
    Even when I have a careless behavior

    If you had it, would you light my sky
    With stars, that will shine in the night
    As bright as your smile, and your eyes
    As bright as our journey into the light

    If we could be, what would you say?
    What would you do if I said I love you
    Could I give you my heart and know that
    Its safe and my dreams would come true

  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    I'm So Over You

    I can't put everything out there,
    because that would be too big of a risk to take.

    I can't tell you all these feelings built up inside me,
    because I'm afraid I won't hear the same thing back.

    I can't keep holding on,
    because I've wasted three years liking you.

    I can't see us together,
    because neither of us have been able to open up to one another.

    I can't see that connection, that special bond we share,
    because there never was one, not even from the start.

    I can't tell you how I feel,
    because I'm afraid you just don't feel the same.

    I can't keep thinking about you,
    because I overthink things way too much.

    I can't do this anymore,
    because I'm just not ready for you.

    I can't do this,
    because I know I'm not good enough for you.

    I simply can't be with you,
    because I don't see a future with you.

    I am officially over you, for the time being,
    because I need to rethink how I feel about you.

  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    If You Look Harder You Might See.

    Deep down inside me,
    I withold countless feelings -
    That I'm hesitant to express.
    For the feeling of rejection is alarming.

    But, boy.. if you look harder,
    You might just see, a girl who likes you.
    Someone who would do anything in her power,
    Just to be with you for a second.

    She's not despondent,
    Oh no, she just likes everything about you.
    Your ravishing smile gives her butterflies,
    And your charisma makes her fall for you harder.

    If you would just give her the consolation,
    The feeling of being safe,
    Maybe she would open up to you,
    But until then, these feelings remain concealed.

    She will not open up her heart to someone,
    like you - someone who doesn't know her well.
    The fear of rejection is the only thing on her mind,
    She is scared to fall for you -
    But if you just look harder, you may just see -
    A considerate girl who just wants to be with you.

  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    Love Isn't Imaginary.

    Today - all around the world,
    everyone is trying to find love.
    Of all the people who have discovered it thus far,
    will tell you and I, love isn't imaginary.

    In fact, love is the farthest from imaginary.
    Love is so substanial and felt by many.
    Anybody who falls in love,
    enjoys the adventure.
    Unfortunetly, some hearts get crushed -
    which leaves a uncongenial feeling.
    But, entirely - it's quite enduring.

    Love can be articulate,
    or felt in numerous ways.
    There's always a special way of showing
    affection towards the one person you love.

    Such romance can also become very intimate.
    It is the one thing in life,
    that most people are lucky to comprehend,
    whether they find it instantly, or slowly.

    Bottom line,
    love is not fake nor imaginary by any means.

  • Lizaveta
    16 years ago

    "every colour of the rainbow",, "it hurts to remember you",, "beyond the realms of reality",, please

  • Rachel
    16 years ago

    I would like to reserve "If It Was Yours" and "It Hurts to Remember You," please and thank you. :)

  • Lizaveta
    16 years ago

    It hurts to remember you

    Among routine and casualty
    ___________________Who would have thought
    ______________________________________It hurts

    To see you in a memory
    ___________________Like in a mirror,
    ______________________________________Because

    The memories
    ___________________I tried to save
    ______________________________________So hard,

    The silent tears
    ___________________Never to be shed,
    ______________________________________Are in my heart.

    And the image of your face
    ___________________Is not as vivid
    ______________________________________As it used to be:

    In the incessant race of days
    ___________________It became livid
    ______________________________________And now is hard to see.

    The mirror in my heart
    ___________________That was supposed to reflect you
    ______________________________________Was violently broken,

    So was I.
    ___________________But now as I've gone through
    ______________________________________It and again my eyes I open,

    I thought
    ___________________Your face will be
    ______________________________________Another memory to keep.

    But why does it hurt
    ___________________To remember you and me
    ______________________________________What caused the pain I feel?

    The mirror in my heart
    ___________________That I created
    ______________________________________To reflect without ceases

    The face of you I loved
    ___________________Was broken
    ______________________________________Into pieces.

    These sharp tiny fragments,
    ___________________They hurt way
    ______________________________________Far too much.

    This bitterness
    ___________________Can't go away,
    ______________________________________It's such

    A deep wound,
    ___________________And never will I
    ______________________________________Let memories

    Be always around
    ___________________It's time
    ______________________________________I realize

    ........I just have to let it all go away

    *this is a "staircase" poem format. if you can't get the rhythm, read it aloud.*

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    Sorry, Rachel, Lizaveta beat you to the title "It Hurts To Remember You".
    You can pick another title if you want or do that title in your own time, not for the contest :)

    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • LadyPearl
    16 years ago

    RESERVE: BEYOND THE REALMS OF REALITY

  • Lizaveta
    16 years ago

    Every colour of the rainbow

    Red is my heart in which I feel
    Love to the world around
    Orange is the sun to give
    Warmth to the air and ground

    Yellow are sunrays that fill
    The world with joy and laughter
    Green are trees that always are so still
    And will stand always thereafter

    Azure is sky in which I see
    No clouds, no rain, no sorrow.
    Blue is the ocean filled with glee
    Always: today, tomorrow.

    Violet is captivating milky twilight,
    The beauty of the world:
    The sun and stars, day and night
    Are always in my soul.

    Red is the heart in which I love
    The world around me
    But most of all I love with glow
    Your face I now can't see

    Orange is the laughter that we had
    Those days I reminisce
    Yellow were out smiles that
    Were full of love and bliss

    Green was the field where we danced
    To the music of the sun
    Azure were your eyes when you glanced
    At me and said "Goodbye"

    Blue was my heart when I waved
    My hand and saw your face
    The one last time, but I have saved
    In memories your last embrace

    Violet was a flower in my hand
    That you gave me goodbye
    And rain has passed already, and
    I look up in the sky.

    The rainbow now reminds me of
    How much I love this life
    Whatever happens, no regret:
    Every colour of the rainbow
    Is in my heart, inside

  • The Queen
    16 years ago

    Love Isnt Imaginary and Every Colour of The Rainbow Please xDD.

    Thanks;)

  • Rachel
    16 years ago

    Sorry - I missed that. I'll think about picking another title, if that's okay... my bad. :)

    Anyway, here goes "If It Was Yours"

    If it was yours, you would know it, you say;
    You would hold it quite close, not just throw it away.
    You would treasure it always, and treasure it well -
    Quintessential devotion - would not that be swell?

    You insist without fail that it's not yours to hold;
    That it's still mine, this purity gilded with gold.
    But I know the truth, it's unshakeably clear:
    You alone own my life, hold my fortune most dear.

    It cries out in yearning, yet you hear it not;
    Nor have you acknowledged the pain that you've wrought.
    In your hands lies everything that I've ever known,
    For the object that lingers where truth stands alone,

    The one that wilts over a little each time
    I pen yet another ridiculous rhyme
    In hopes that you'll realise t'was yours from the start,
    Though broken and bleeding, you've captured my heart.

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Ooo I missed "If you look harder you might see" Reserve that as well, thanks =)

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    If You Look Harder You Might See (Glosa Verse)

    Lines Taken From Rachel Stevens-I Said Never Again (But Here We Are)

    "You're the one who's creeping
    Rough love's so deceiving
    I said never again but here we are
    A pure sweetness you're my only weakness"

    Look a little harder baby, tell me what you see
    Can you see me drowning in this endless misery
    Hurting me constantly, like a record on repeat
    Yet without you I'm still feeling so incomplete
    At a loss now, don't know what to do anymore
    Still my emotions and love you continue to ignore
    Together we could be wonderful, so damn perfect
    But seems I'm just someone for you to reject
    Then everytime I end up silently weeping
    ..."You're the one who's creeping"

    What do they say, everyone makes mistakes
    Now had as much heartbreak as I can take
    Come a little closer, look into my eyes
    So obvious you're still uttering decietful lies
    Punishing me for the wrongs done in the past
    Not sure how much longer my strength can last
    Can't you see that I would never hurt you
    Baby you got my whole world askew
    No good for me, but this is addicting
    ..."Rough love's so decieving"

    Always falling blindly back into your bed
    Wondering why I can't move on instead
    You got my heart held tightly in your hands
    Crushing it and you don't even understand
    Shouldn't let you fool me, to good for that
    Yet I sit alone waiting for you to come back
    Wanting to be together, just us two alone
    Silently in my mind sorrowful thoughts roam
    Maybe one day you''ll push me a little too far
    ..."I said never again (But here we are)"

    So come on honey, look very closely at me
    Love you more than anyone, don't you agree
    We could go far, be so wonderful together
    Live in a paradise with a fairytale forever
    Start paying attenton to how I'm feeling
    Recall when our love was so appealing
    Trust that I wont hurt you, give us a chance
    Like me, believe in a beautiful romance
    Don't allow us to be overtaken with bleakness
    Cause..."A pure sweetness you're my only weakness"

    Glosa-Verse: A Spanish form invented by court poets in the 14th and 15th centuries. An opening quatrain, called a 'cabeza' is chosen from another poet, or song. The glosa elaborates or 'glosses' on the quatrain with four ten line stanzas, their concluding lines taken consecutively from the quatrain.

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Paint It Black

    Used to be so complete, heart was pure and light
    Only now left feeling low, confused and contrite
    Wondering what happened to passion we used to feel
    Used to trust, but now emotions must be concealed

    Days are long, nights are filled with endless pain
    How can love still be here yet tinged with disdain?
    Once believed in you, in true love, in us together
    Guess you were never one to believe in forever

    With each passing day, armour crumbling a little more
    Why still love you when it's clearly her that you adore?
    Yet even though you're with her, whisper you love me
    However can't be sure, of this I have no guarentee

    So you keep on carelessly playing with my emotions
    Are you aware everyday you leave me even more broken
    Seems I'm just your puppet on a string, you have my heart
    Love you more every day yet always wish for you to depart

    Never knew it possible to feel so lost, small and confused
    Know how much I love you yet my trust you constantly abuse
    So continue with what you're doing, I'm here for you to attack
    Thanks to you my once angelic heart has become ivory black

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    It Hurts To Remember You

    Reminiscing about wen we thought our love would last
    Ironic how things can become complicated so fast
    How can I love someone so manipulative and unkind
    Trying without success to erase you from my mind

    Truth be told, still love you more than you know
    It's just that my emotions I no longer let show
    Deep down we're both aware you still have my heart
    Funny that I once thought we would never part

    Gave all of my trust but it was all in vain
    For you left me all alone and crying in pain
    Wondering when it'll stop, this endless misery
    Though deep down know you're no good for me

    My world once technicolour till you painted it black
    Just another liar and cheat, yet still want you back
    Say that you love me but we can't be together
    Guess it was another lie when you promised forever

    Takes all of my energy just to get through each day
    How did I let myself become another heartbroken cliche
    Wondering now if love we shared you ever did value
    'Cause though it hurts to think of you it's all I can do

    Now when thinking of you, down cascade the tears
    How could you leave me alone and let our love disappear
    Mind screaming you're no good, now it's time to move on
    Seems my heart just wont accept the fact that you're gone

  • Sweet Fragility
    16 years ago

    Paint It Black.

  • NinjaGirl
    16 years ago

    CHANGE: I'M CHANGING THE DUE DATE. I'M NOT SURE WHEN THIS CONTEST WILL END AT THE MOMENT

  • Sweet Fragility
    16 years ago

    Paint It Black

    Thoughts scattered like color patterns of broken art --
    The tears hidden below the surface of what's seen,
    Anguished cries fill the abyss of my patchwork heart.

    Rays of light used to reflect off vivid stained glass --
    A burning beacon that shone so brightly in the dark,
    Dimmed 'til I couldn't see the shadows of the past.

    Good times washed away like faded watercolors --
    Gone with an abruptness that leaves a sad longing,
    For a newfound future that no longer shimmers.

    An empty slate, shattered memories of before --
    So paint it black, just paint everything black,
    Because some things don't matter anymore.

    Copyright (c) Sweet Fragility
    7/11/08

  • LiliLoser
    16 years ago

    Could I please have 'If it was yours'
    Thankies.x

  • Moose
    16 years ago

    My Guardian Angel please

    and remove my others lol

  • Taylor
    16 years ago

    Paint It Black

    Stupid black car
    With the stupid boy inside
    I'd drive 1000 miles
    Just to cross paths
    & I'll wave again
    While you drive by
    Turn the music louder
    But it won't drown out regret
    That seat once belonged to me
    When we would drive around
    But dark, tinted windows
    Make memories hard to see
    So, I'll stare outside
    As I ride around alone
    I'll take tonight's starry sky
    & let my mind paint it black
    Then maybe I'll feel closer to that
    Stupid black car
    With the stupid boy inside

  • BlueEyedMystery
    16 years ago

    Can I please reserve:

    Beyond The Realms Of Reality

    Thanks!

  • BlueEyedMystery
    16 years ago

    Beyond The Realms Of Reality

    Step through the incandescent light,
    of a door that holds a magical place.
    Blinded by a world drenched in color,
    outlined with silk ribbons and lace.

    Trees engulfed in apricot-emerald,
    the sky painted in violet streaks,
    a horizon torched in an orange glow,
    like a sunset that goes on for weeks.

    Rose petals ride on a tepid breeze,
    bringing the scent of your childhood.
    A past that was cut short of it's time,
    one that you never quite understood.

    A thick ribbon of river slices through,
    it's gentle rhythm tranquil and steady.
    A boat floats idle off to the far side,
    waiting patiently, when you're ready.

    Blades of grass turn to butterflies,
    with just a slim touch from your hand.
    Orange-blue fire doesn't bite or sting,
    from candles burning in the sand.

    Blossoms spill down like raindrops,
    to melt and sparkle in your hair.
    A lullaby is playing in the distance,
    one that your mother use to share.

    Eat the berries that have fallen,
    and you'll never be allowed to leave,
    but who would possibly want to,
    when you can be blissful and naive?

    So open your heart and step inside,
    reveal your desires to this realm,
    dance with the fairies, twirling around,
    let the fantasy and illusion overwhelm.

    `This was unspired from a book I read.

  • The Queen
    16 years ago

    Love Isn't Imaginary

    Love letters may fade away in time
    Yet every single penned thoughts
    Are echoes from my admiring heart
    Vividly, your images comes into sight

    Love isn't imaginary
    I can feel it from the touch of your hand
    I can see it from the look in your eyes
    I can hear it from the beat of your heart

    Our love song may never be found out
    It's the only rhythm learned by our hearts
    For whenever a day spend with you
    Together as one, song of love to hum

    Love isn't imaginary
    For even in my sleep I experience love
    In the depth of my dreams you never leave
    Fighting the distance not to play a part

    Goodnight kisses and sweet dreams hugs
    Let go off emotions set them free to intervene
    No matter what kind of world were in at this time
    Even if it's just a game I don't mind

    Hold me by your hand with your gentle fingers
    From my cheeks down to my sweet lips
    Kiss me like you never kissed anyone before
    Love isn't imaginary, love is you and me

  • Lil Ash
    16 years ago

    My Guardian Angel Pls An Thx ^-^