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Hi everyone, I wrote these poems a while ago, about this girl.

I didn't intend to ever post them or anything, they were more of just a way to express myself. Im only in 9th grade, and have no real training or anything

I was wondering if maybe some people would comment them, some are better than others, but i just want to what other people think of them.

Thanks.

I did one.. it was really good. you have talent. :)

I have written a poem by the name of "Child Begger Noshi"...read it,rate it and let me know what you feel about it
Thanks...and love

I have written a poem by the name of "Child Begger Noshi"...read it,rate it and let me know what you feel about it
Thanks...and love

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