Venting...for 20yrs and younger only. lol.

  • Sierra Rae
    20 years ago

    OKay, I am just annoyed at something on the site and need to get it off my chest. If this is about you...I'm not gona fight with you and will just ignore that you posted here if and when you do. OKay...I'm going to be using direct quotes out of the "AMERICA HATED - BY JAMES DARON STARR" Post. Again-I don't want you to critique me on this...but I just got annoyed to the point of having to say something, although usually i don't like people doing things like I'm about to do...but I'm venting so...anyways. and a mod can delete this afterword if they feel it offensive. And only the teens on the site will even partially relate to this...does anyone else feel it??? OKay so anyway...

    1st Quote..."Only so much polishing one can do when there is so much BS going on in the world." That isn't a sentence!!! Who talks like that??? It doesn't even seem gramatically correct...They're just odd words switched around to sound pretty. It doesn't even make sense!!

    And let's examine this "BS" in the world...or in your writing!!

    Exhibit A: "Be it also known that what Americans implore as ideals, what European countries proclaim vile and distasteful, remember we “Americans” are Europeans. We, most of us came from Europe, our ancestors, our forefathers. What America in general is proclaimed to wield as rude and vulgar manners is but what Europe has been doing for thousands of years. The United States is but 200 hundred years old and unlike our cousins from across the sea, we are allowed and cherish the freedom of saying what we feel with out the fear of the guillotine, the scaffolds, or Crucifixion."

    We are examining the style of writing, not the words here...just so everyone knows. OKay-so "be it known" that this passage does not even make sense. "Be it also known that what Americans implore as ideals, what European countries proclaim vile and distasteful, [{are what?? you just stopped your thought. there is no end to this sentence-the following is just a stray thought!}] remember we “Americans” are Europeans."
    The normal, non BS version...is as follows.
    .......; and know that WHILE European countries proclaim our ideals as vile and distasteful, we "Americans" are Europeans.

    It's just a bunch of Bull. it doesn't make sense...it doesn't fit together, it isn't gramatically correct; there are just big words used instead of little ones and he tries to sound all smart.

    Exhibit B: (the actual James:)
    "Maybe I missed a post or something but according to what JustPlainMe posted I do not see how it contradicts my previous statements unless you did not read it fully or was not able to comprehend the words I used, regardless, here is what JustPlainMe posted and is what I agree with, to make it as clear for you as possible."

    yes he could've been trying to make things clear for me because I didn't understand his BS...but the style is just so different. "or something" is used how my friends and I talk...and notice the lack of big words. If you truly talked like he typed in exhibit A, then it wouldn't just switch. The whole order of words and everything is different and just the entire...what's it called-i guess i'll use the word style again...style is changed!!!!

    I'm sorry, done now, but it just disgusts me because anytime I read a thread and there is a post from this person...it's so shmoozed up and seems like he's trying to act smart. I can just picture the family guy writer (dont member the name) on those old Adult swim comercials where there's this funny guy and you know he's not all creme cakes and cigars-yet he's sitting there in his suit with his pipe reading or something trying to act smart. that's what i picture when I read anything the above mentioned wrote. It just makes me sick!!!

    OKay-now someone can delete this if they want. (Thnx for reading if you actually got through it..lol)

    And for the record...I know I don't have perfect grammer and I know I have different "style" writings too (like actually typing or goin lyke dis) because I know someone will mention that...lol

    OKay thnx again...
    Sierra Rae

  • Eibutsina
    20 years ago

    I agree with Golden Tear

    This post in a nice way sucked...

    sorry :o(