Can you please take a look at this?

Can you guys that are reading this right now...please take a look on to my poems and comment or rate.
thanks a lot have a niice day!!!

The proper place for requests like this is under the Request to read/write/comment section.

Ya.. i'll check n comment n rate ur poems.. will be a plesure.. hehe..

What Rachel said. You should put them there and then perhaps you will get people to view the poems, proper section is the best thing for this type of request.