Anybody want poem reviews?

- Name : Sorinity
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Sorinity
16 years ago

"where were you"

its a song that i havent finished yet and id really like some input from others

thanks much

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- Name : Nobodys Hero
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Nobodys Hero
16 years ago

All done as promised any more?
people can repost for more if they want

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- Name : Nobodys Hero
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Nobodys Hero
16 years ago

?? any1

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- Name : Blissful
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Blissful
16 years ago

Velvet Whispers of a Tempted Heart.

please and thank you. :]

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- Name : Mishka
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Mishka
16 years ago

How Did I Get So Lucky? hehehe :) thanks!

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- Name : andhereIstand
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andhereIstand
16 years ago

My most recent pelase! thanks you@

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- Name : BrokenREALiTy
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- Joined : Mar 9, 2006
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BrokenREALiTy
16 years ago

Golly, this is still going? O__O?

Could you please do :

`Beheading of Gravel Toes

Thanks, love :)

..__MiNDYY

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- Name : Nobodys Hero
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Nobodys Hero
16 years ago

I know this reveiw post seems long but im too lazy to start a new 1
So just keep posting and I wont stop reveiwing =]

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- Name : ghosts in bloom
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ghosts in bloom
16 years ago

Could you please rrc

`The Sixth Floor of Contentment

(: Thank you in advance!

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- Name : Nobodys Hero
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Nobodys Hero
16 years ago

Done
Any more

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- Name : Kelly L
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- Joined : Jul 29, 2005
- Posts : 28
Kelly L
16 years ago

Can you read my poem "Numbers"? =]

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- Name : BleedingAngel
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- Joined : Feb 20, 2005
- Posts : 844
BleedingAngel
16 years ago

Please comment on my new poem " He changed my soul" or "size Zero"

Thank you so much in advance :0)

Sabrina

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- Name : Roxy
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- Joined : Apr 10, 2006
- Posts : 261
Roxy
16 years ago

Please comment on "Broken Glass"

Thank you so much
xxxxxx

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- Name : Nobodys Hero
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Nobodys Hero
16 years ago

All done again

Anymore?? !! Just Ask?

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- Name : Melpomene
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Melpomene
16 years ago

Any of mine would be greatly appreciated.

-Mel

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- Name : Nobodys Hero
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Nobodys Hero
16 years ago

Done =]

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- Name : Melpomene
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Melpomene
16 years ago

Thank you =]

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Name : Dark Savior
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Joined : Oct 3, 2004
Posts : 235

Could you read either of my new ones.

Sorry to Say(Ex GF's View)

Judgement day

I have been out of writing for a long time, recently I have felt the NEED to get back into it.

Thank you in advance.

- Name : Nobodys Hero
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Nobodys Hero
16 years ago

No problem, any more ppl?

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- Name : Dark Savior
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Dark Savior
16 years ago

Just posted some for you. Let me know what you honestly think as well.

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- Name : LiveMyLifeOnALullaby
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- Joined : Apr 18, 2007
- Posts : 40
LiveMyLifeOnALullaby
16 years ago

Um, can you please do "Kiki Strike" and "Perfume"?
Thank you!

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- Name : Dark Savior
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Dark Savior
16 years ago

I helped and read Perfume.

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- Name : Nobodys Hero
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Nobodys Hero
16 years ago

All done =]
Any more

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- Name : Nobodys Hero
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Nobodys Hero
16 years ago

Any1 at all?

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- Name : slighte
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slighte
16 years ago

'running from you' please?

thanks!

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- Name : xxxStarSxxx
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- Joined : Apr 5, 2005
- Posts : 536
xxxStarSxxx
16 years ago

Any of my featured, please.

Thank you

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- Name : SashaMirage
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- Joined : Jul 1, 2008
- Posts : 41
SashaMirage
16 years ago

Hi please read any one of your choice,
thank you in advance!

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- Name : nikki
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- Joined : Jul 20, 2005
- Posts : 367
nikki
16 years ago

Hi! could u possibly do Prince for Princess please? thanks in advance!!

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- Name : enigmatic_prey
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- Joined : Jul 21, 2007
- Posts : 77
enigmatic_prey
16 years ago

Hello!..

can u please leave comments in my new poem...

Never is A promise????

thanks in advance....

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- Name : nikki
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- Joined : May 3, 2006
- Posts : 1087
nikki
16 years ago

Hi could you possibly do any of my latest, they haven't got much feedback, and it would be greatly appreciated.
thanks in advance

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- Name : NyellMoonlight
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- Joined : Apr 23, 2007
- Posts : 1745
NyellMoonlight
16 years ago

Can you comment on "Yesterday Is Dead", please? Thanks a lot in advance :)

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- Name : HidinVictim
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- Joined : Oct 26, 2007
- Posts : 346
HidinVictim
16 years ago

Please do.... What Happens To Forever After the Break-up? thank you very much!!!!

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- Name : HidinVictim
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HidinVictim
16 years ago

Can you do... What Happens After The Break-Up? please

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- Name : Bianca The Queen Of Hearts
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- Posts : 133
Bianca The Queen Of Hearts
16 years ago

Can you comment on 'heart' and 'queen of hearts' please thanx!

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- Name : Lauren Waszkiewicz
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- Joined : Feb 27, 2005
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Lauren Waszkiewicz
16 years ago

Keep your window closed at night

or

torture?

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- Name : Steven Topaz
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- Joined : Aug 11, 2008
- Posts : 93
Steven Topaz
16 years ago

Short one for ya "That forgotton feeling"

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- Name : rhend
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- Joined : Aug 19, 2008
- Posts : 44
rhend
16 years ago

THe temptress

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- Name : Italian Stallion
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Italian Stallion
16 years ago

This is getting too long, start a new thread if you'd like, this is now being locked.

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