Lets Make a Deal =)

"Answer Me this Daddy"
"The Center Of My Universe"

those poems are the ones i want commented.
your welcome to do any other of my poems as well after you comment those.

For the comments you leave, I will double your comments in return.

Rating is also welcomed.

1-3 liners not accepted.

Any takers?

Would you comment my new poem
'My lonley angel'
I'l do both of yours =]

I shall do some of yours, just pick some of mine out to do, whichever :)