A lie i came to love....2 comments for you if u comment mine

Heyy guys i havent written anything for ages
but yea i had a recent really crappy breakup

i went out with a guy who had been ma best mate for a while, nd yea i loved our relationship nd teh way he acted he said he loved me, and yea he acted like he wanted to be with me...but then one day he randomly went cold, and that was the end of it

so yea i wrote a poem called, a lie i came to love

and yea any comments would b great, i no its not an awesome poem, but it has ma feelinsg in it

any comments will be happily returned to any of your poems

I will do it now,
sounds like a sucky thing you had to go through. but sometimes feelings fade.

Thanx so much for the comment
and i commented a couple of urs
nice poems =]

I LIKED YOUR POEM AND I KNOW THE FEELIN BREAKIN UP IS NEVER EASY

Thanx so much for the comment

i really like ur poems as well!!
xxx

Done..

Pls do my latest..

Thanks in advance..xDD

Thanx heaps for da comment

luv ur poems

xxx

Any one else??

Thank you so much for the comment it was very true
i liiked ur nanas saying and i understand it

thank you again xxx