"Show Me The Light" [[1 FOR 1]]

  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    `New poem, "Show Me The Light."
    `It'd mean a lot to me if you read it!
    `No 1-3 liners, if you give me one, I will not return the favor. Sorry.
    `Make sure you read the poem, don't just scan it.
    `Honest, GOOD comments, please. That's all I ask. :]
    `Vote.
    `Leave title after you're finished.

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  • Lori
    16 years ago

    DONE

    "Show Me The light"
    Beautiful work my dear:)

    Just do the one that catches your eye;)
    Thanks!
    <3 Loni

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  • Michael D Nalley
    16 years ago

    I wish I could write free verse like that

    please do obssession

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  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    Loni - done.

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  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    Michael - done.

    Anyone else?

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  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Will do. =]

    ~Mel

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  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    Doneee. (:

    Anyone elsee?

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  • Finalgravedigger
    16 years ago

    Alright i read it plz rrc my latest

    As my soul touches the moon.

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  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    Done. Absolutely flawless write.

    Anyone else before I close this?

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  • Austin
    16 years ago

    Yes me!! haha Done. Good job.

    Do my new poem please. "Colors fall like snow."

    Thank you!

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  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    Done...

    Anyone else?

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