"Enclosed Within Darkness." [[1 FOR 1 ]]

Name : Courageous Dreamer
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Joined : May 18, 2008
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Another new poem up.
"Enclosed Within Darkness."
It's not my usual style at all, so I want some honest comments please.
No 1-3 liners, if you leave me one, I will not return the comment whatsoever. Not even a generous one liner, Sorry.
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Thanks (:

- Name : Normal is the Watchword
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Normal is the Watchword
16 years ago

Fragmented

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- Name : BREEawNUHH
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BREEawNUHH
16 years ago

Done.

My latest, please?
Thanks!
:]

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- Name : Courageous Dreamer
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Courageous Dreamer
16 years ago

Done with both.

Anyone else?

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- Name : Courageous Dreamer
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Courageous Dreamer
16 years ago

Still looking for more comments.

:]

Anyone else??

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