[1-for-1]/[2-for-2]..

I would like feedback [r/r/c] on these poems:

1. "Linger" -- [written for a contest]
2. "Wipe Away The Tears"
3. "Distance Makes No Difference" -- [collab]
4. "Take On The World" -- [written for a contest]
5. "Thirst For Blood" -- [written for a contest]

- No one/two/three liners. If you leave them, you will get the same thing back, if I'm in a good mood.
- Actually VOTE. It's part of the deal. If you do not vote on mine, I will NOT vote on yours. And be honest with your comments & votes.
- Please, leave titles.

Oh. & if you leave good comments, I'll double the favour. And I'll PM you if that's the case. :]

Thanks. <3

Lalala.
:]

Just do anything really .. Hehe , i need feed back on all of them !

A Phine To Sour skittles -- Doneeee.

Holly -- Done. I hope my comments did not offend you.

BayJ - done.

Anyone else?

Done:) Just comment on any of mine:)

Rikki -- done.

Loni -- done.

--CLOSED--