Two New Poems.

I have **THREE** new poems up...
"Deep Dark Hole"
"Let Me Decay Here, Beside My Broken Heart."
**NEW**"Show Me What Love is Like"

I'd appreciate any comments I can get on these.
`Please make your comments thoughtful, honest, and provide suggestions on how to make it better if you can think of any.
`NO 1-3 liners. Leave me one, you get nothing in return.
`Vote -yes, I want you to vote. It's part of the deal. I always vote back.
`Leave title(s).

Thanks. (:

Done.
<3

"In The Mind Of The Suicidal" and "The Devil's Playground"

thanks youu =)

Zeenat - Done..

Courtney - done. (:

Anyone else?

Anyone..?

I threw in another poem to the deal if anyone is interested. (:

Hiya done could you please do
1) Jaded Rose
2) A soft and gentle reminder
3) On they edge of reality
Thanks very much
Adele

Done.
Hope I wasn't too harsh. :\

Anyone else? :]