A "poetic" challenge(?)

  • Ria
    16 years ago

    So boys and girls.I'm here to challenge you to a little,let's call it,game...

    We all have things we wanna hide,right?Secrets we may never share.And we all have poetry in common.So how about you dress yous secrets with a poem or a few lines...I know it'd make me feel better..do you want to try?

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    Here it goes

    This is the moment that I've been waiting for
    The moment when I can finally unwind
    When I can't see the sadness in my life
    And these tired stars become more vivid in my mind

    When I can see my one true companion
    And my fake Friends fade away
    When I don't wake to a horrid morning
    But when I reach the end of the day

    When my tired muscles can rest
    And my sleeping mind can wake
    When the millions of my unseen guardians
    Can come upon me and right their mistake

    When the heat dissipates
    And the darkness makes things right
    With the moon and the stars watching over me
    I long for the night

  • LoreNz0
    16 years ago

    Hmm interesting concept... ok im in
    im just gonna make this up off the top of my head which i dont do normally so dont blame me too much if its crap...)

    -Sin-
    whats done is done, but not forgotten.
    we grow and learn, as adams twin.
    for me intensions, still lie holy.
    but ignorance conjured, deeds of sin.

    betrayal to, the ones held dearest.
    i let the deamon, nest within.
    the reasons why, would not condemn me.
    dispite direction, i chose to sin.

    the life i led, is stale and perished.
    but guilty weeds have rooted in.
    to all that life, is best forgotten.
    my concience screams, engraved in sin.

    hmm ok that was my attempt, hope it makes a good contribution.
    looks like its ur turn Ria... =]

  • PrincesaTJDA
    16 years ago

    Love
    friends
    marrige

    one stranger
    new & familiar faces
    the choice was givven and i said yes

    it feels so great
    ill try to make time
    you need time, so much time and work

    still feels good
    how i miss my friends
    && u don't care for friends

    greatest feeling ever
    it feels wron to miss you now.
    sh... u cant know i saw then today.

    so much love
    so many feelings
    so many lies.

  • Michaela T
    16 years ago

    Surely I'll regret
    If I'm going to tell you
    I love you so much
    And you never knew

    You're my beloved friend
    And you love somebody else
    I'm just someone you know
    But please let my heart dwells

    All our conversations
    Started in camaraderie
    And I simply hate that thing
    So badly

    Cause I don't want
    To be your friend anymore
    And what I like
    Is to love you for sure

  • Twisted Heart
    16 years ago

    My Life With Me

    Upon streets of dark decay
    I walk among crowds
    Lonely heart that lives inside
    Before thee, I bow
    Not one to hold my trust in height
    Nor see the depths of pain
    I, lonely one, will walk alone
    Not mindful of the rain.

    Too many dreams lie in wait
    Somehow they fall aside
    With duties that behold my days
    Within them surely hide
    Each hope that fills my heart
    Up to the final breath
    That be the faith to sustain
    My lagacy in death

  • jess and cait
    16 years ago

    Red lying of the floor
    this has happened many times befor
    i cant stop useing a sliver object
    its somthing my life feels recked

    ok thats all i got

  • Blueleo
    16 years ago

    In this calm responsible person
    A history of mindless devotion
    Many stories will never be told
    How yesteryear made me old

    To this day, perfections do loom
    No other option for me to groom
    Time to play has come to past
    The face I wear will be my last

  • Ria
    16 years ago

    A traitor in my skin as you draw closer
    And memories remember
    as light forgets

    The world must never know we met
    Must never care we parted.

    Will you accept my gift
    Darker than ever,
    only to taste your dream tonight?

    Or will you deny me
    in this last hour
    as darkness is torn away
    by light?

    Leave now,I beg you.
    This world must never know we met
    must never care we parted

  • My Mistakes
    15 years ago

    I'll pass on telling my secrets...

  • BlackIris
    15 years ago

    My secrets are only mine
    Will never be shared, will never shine
    Buried in the darkness of my mind
    So don't try to be kind, don't you whine
    I'm not sharing you what's meant to be only mine
    :)

  • xToBeWithYoux
    15 years ago

    I don't really have any secrets... And this isn't as bad as it sounds. Just thought I'd let you know...

    ~~

    Secrets...

    Winter secrets lie
    Depressed and shrewd on the floor,
    With my withered clothes.

    ~~

    That's actually my first haiku. And it's awful. Make what you wish of it

  • xx
    15 years ago

    So you wanna know my secrets?
    I'll tell you only one.

    There's this stupid little girl
    And she fears that she's in love.
    She's sad inside all the time
    'Cause her heart has had enough.

    Sure she smiles sometimes,
    But she cries much more.
    All because of this stupid boy
    That she's forced to adore.

    And sure, he is perfection-
    In every single way.
    He makes her stumble and stutter
    Every single day.

    So you see, she is in love
    With this boy that is perfect as can be.
    And you see, she is stupid.
    And you see...she is me.

    Really crappy poem. Made it up on the spot. Haha.

    (I'm in love with the boy I hate, he enjoys pointing out every bad thing about me. I'm in love with a critic and a skeptic, a traitor; I'd trade him in a second. He's a backseat driver a constant forgetter, he's attractive but bitter.)

  • Baby Rainbow
    15 years ago

    Sometimes i wonder why i'm still here
    when everyday i am living in fear
    the one thing that can cure me
    i know can never be
    the past will always be true
    it is always there to haunt you
    how much longer should i stay
    or is it time to stop running away?