2 new poems, please R/R/C, will return favor!

Hello readers, I have two new poems, and would love for comments, and rates. The titles are "When It Comes" and "Across the Floor", in return I will fully comment and rate two of your selected poems, please leave the names of the poems you wish for me to comment. Thanks a bunch!

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Well done

pls rrc my 2 latest poems

thanks

Done i really enjoyed Across The Floor its a really good poem keep it up can u plz rrc i miss you and any other 1 of your choice thankz nd great work 2