NEW! Poem

I have a new poem, "Gone in a Blink of an Eye."

`It's my first poem in like a week or more, so I warn you.. it may not be that great from my previous writes.. so please help me and give some honest, helpful feedback to help me improve.
`NO 1-3 liners.. pleeeease. They will not help me! Give me something more than "Good job!!" Leave one, you will not get a comment in return. I'm sorry.
`VOTE - Yes, its part of the deal.
`Leave title [ 1 for 1 deal ]

I'll check it out right now...

Please do my poem "Exposed"

Thanks in advance!

Done and thank you..

Anyone else?

Will do
"hissing sounds of horror"

Zeenat donee.
kaila, i will get to yours tmrw or Monday!

:]

Anyone else??