Heavenly Bliss [Sestina] -- 1/3

Hey all. Now that I'm back online I'm submitting poems I've written while offline for the past few months.

This poem I just wrote this morning. It's called, "Heavenly Bliss [Sestina]" -- As you can see it's a Sestina poetry style. I've never done one before so I would love feedback.

R/r/c this an I will r/r/c 3 of yours in turn. Thank you!

Plot:
An angel teaching how to love.

Rules:
Must post back here to receive credit.

Other:
Please leave honest feedback.

Great poems. I liked "One Night I Ask" A LOT. And I haven't seen you in awhile! How ya been?

I gotcha on my way do my 2 latest and
what ever one that catches your eye.
Done :)

Hi well done

i just have 1 poem right now can u plss rrc thanks alot

Hi its done

would u pls rrc my 3 latest titled:

why cant we
destiny
do u rember me

thanks alot

Ok done.

can youh do "now you're gone" "why am I feeling like this?" and "have you ever noticed..."