Is this one good

  • loving my kids tessa and savannah
    16 years ago

    Well i just want to know if this good???

    As i enter my house i slam the door behind me
    i had a bad day,to to it off my mom was not home
    she never is home
    filling depressed i walk through the house up to my room i get a box from underneath my bed with suicidal thoughts going through my head
    i get up go to the window and take my box.
    i get the blade i make a slit on my wrist
    looking down at the blood makes me feel better
    i make it deeper and now I'm shaking i want to cry
    no tears would come when i see the blood i feel sleepy then i start feel dizzy i look around me when ever thing stops my time had ended, my mom
    has come home calling my name without a sound
    she starts to wonder
    she runs up to my room stops and stares
    A shocked look on her face
    she couldn't believe what i have done
    As a tear falls from her face
    she tumble to the floor
    and she wonder why
    she get the blade and ask what did i do wrong?
    with one blink she put the blade to her wrist and
    say goodbye
    then my brother comes home he knows something not right. me and mom are nowhere in site
    he goes up stairs the door is open
    There he stood to see there mother and me
    laying on the floor he looks around and sees the blood stained carpet
    He starts to cry he get the phone and dials 911
    He explained what he had found when the caps come and the ambulance behind them take mother and me away
    ever one watching they were devastated
    the next day friends and family are the willow tree
    Mourning
    their deaths
    their mother and me
    rest in PEACE

    Written by
    Jessica Pesco
    &
    Amber McDonald