My gf's bday present. Please read ASAP! 1/3

  • Beautiful Forever
    16 years ago

    Hey everyone, today is my girlfriends birthday. I wrote her a poem to give to her as a present, and I'm praying that she'll love it. Please read it and let me know what you think. PLEASE.... It would mean the world to me.

    It's called "A Beautiful White Rose"

    For this I am more than willing to return the favor by 3.

    Topic:
    The feelings I have for my girlfriend. How I truly see her...

    RULES:
    Must comment back here to receive credit.
    Please rate!

    Other:
    Thank you everyone who reads this... so much. It means a lot to me...

  • Anthony Duvalle
    16 years ago

    I'm finished.
    I loved it.
    And she will too.

    Please do my most recent two and any other one you choose.
    Thank you.

    _Anthony_

  • nikki
    16 years ago

    Done, i loved it, it was absolutely beautiful. can you r/r/c my 3 latest, and i voted on your, it would be greatly appreciated if you could vote back
    thanks..
    and lovely poem

  • Robert
    16 years ago

    Ok please comment and vote on any of my featured work I would be grateful. Plot121

  • Curing the Comon Cliche
    16 years ago

    I read it, it was beautiful

  • Beautiful Forever
    16 years ago

    Sorry for being late guys, I didn't forget. I'll r/r/c tomorrow. PROMISE! I've been really sick lately... But I'll be fine by tomorrow. Thank you :)