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I'd love feedback [r/r/c] on a few poems I've written. :]

001. "A Whole New World" -- triquatrain + contest
002. "Summers Warmth" -- nonet
003. "Careless" -- tanka

Rules:
- Comments: you'll get what you give. Give me a one liner ; expect one back.
- Be honest: actually vote and don't give it a five if it doesn't deserve a five. I'll be brutally honest about your poetry.
- Reply back to the thread: LEAVE TITLES.

Thanks. <3

Ok will do two of your poems if you do two or more of mine your choice of any of my featured work would be fine. Plot121

Thank you, all.

I will get to them ASAP.
=]

If it's still open, my newest two would be great, thank you.

jess ~

Soso - done.
=]

Rikki - Done.
:]

Robert - you didn't comment on any of mine? o.O

Ether - Done. =]

Anyone elseeeee?
:]

I did onee.
My newest please.
Thank youu!
:]

Done..Beautiful poem..

Please do my latest one.

Thanks..xDD

I did the nonet. -- very nice write :)

could you please r/r/c :
"our rose"
& "We'll Forget"

thankyouu x)

I'll get to all three of you later tonight or early tomorrow morning.

Temps -- done.

MauLiCiouSss -- done.

LockedInEternity -- I will get to it tomorrow.
=]

Are you still accepting offers? (: I hope so.

I did Summer's Warmth. It was a beautiful nonet too. :]
Could you please do:
`When Dreams Prevail
and
`Midnight Serenade

Thankss. (:

LockedInEternity + Incomplete Riot -- tomorrow. I PROMISE!

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