1-2 Please Read!!!

  • Krista
    16 years ago

    My Short-Lived Life. I will read any two of yours in return. You choice, or I will pick.
    Thanks a bunches!!!
    Krista

  • LockedInEternity
    16 years ago

    Done x)
    amazing write. 5/5

    could you please read :
    "our rose"
    &&
    " We'll forget"

    thankyouu xox

  • Sweet lig
    16 years ago

    Well done!

    pls rrc my 2 newest thanks

  • Michael D Nalley
    16 years ago

    Agreed... very well done indeed

    When all is gone

  • HvN
    16 years ago

    Hey!!

    can u do " juicy love"

    and "you're my fruit"?

    thanks!

  • LockedInEternity
    16 years ago

    Hey, im sorry if i come off as rude or anything,, but the comments you gave me were really disappointing.

    i mean i took my time to analyze your poem and tell you what i honestly thought while in the comments you gave me it felt like you didnt even read my poems cause "great poem, i really liked it, and keep it up" can be used with any poem at all.

    again, im sorry that im being so ungrateful and stuff.. but you really need to stay away from the one liners and actually express what you think about peoples work.. cause thats how they treat your work and they expect the same in return.

    thank you anyways.