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Name : Poet on the Piano
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Joined : Oct 7, 2007
Posts : 7472

I'm in the mood for commenting/rating, so anyone who wants their poem commented and rated, just post here, and I'll get to it for free! Any poems are allowed, and only one poem per post please. I'll give my honest opinion on your poem, and write down my true thoughts on it....

- Name : ether
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- Joined : Oct 14, 2006
- Posts : 674
ether
16 years ago

I'd love if you could do my newest one please =]

Thank you.

jess ~

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
16 years ago

Okay, done.

Anyone else?

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- Name : CourtneyyContageous
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- Joined : Jun 5, 2008
- Posts : 1731
CourtneyyContageous
16 years ago

My newest as well please,
"Four Stages Of Heartbreak"

thanks =)

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- Name : unknown
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- Joined : May 24, 2007
- Posts : 176
unknown
16 years ago

Ann isn't a lazy girl

thanks.. :]

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- Name : A F
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- Joined : Aug 24, 2005
- Posts : 107
A F
16 years ago

Comment "Kept Infidelity"

Thanks <3

xxx.

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- Name : lost in lovee
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- Joined : Jan 9, 2007
- Posts : 127
lost in lovee
16 years ago

Can youh do "tell me"

thanksz in advanced. (:

-antoniaaa*

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- Name : Suicidal Love
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- Joined : Nov 12, 2007
- Posts : 287
Suicidal Love
16 years ago

Any of my featured ones

thanks so much!!

SLxx

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- Name : Michael D Nalley
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- Posts : 6879
Michael D Nalley
16 years ago

WHEN ALL IS GONE

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- Name : andhereIstand
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- Joined : Feb 3, 2008
- Posts : 68
andhereIstand
16 years ago

A Bullet left (please!!!)
thansk!

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- Name : vintage darling
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- Joined : Oct 21, 2007
- Posts : 41
vintage darling
16 years ago

Can you please comment
"somewhere only we know."

?
honest feedback would be great.
thanks

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
16 years ago

Zeenat, CourtneyyContageous, Cursed Boy, and Oh So Contagious, I'm done with your poems, nice job. I'll get to the rest now, but it will take me some time..

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Name : Poet on the Piano
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Posts : 7472

Poet on the Piano
16 years ago

Okay, everyone is finished, nice work, and I really enjoy reading your poems..

This offer is still open, so anyone who would like a comment, just tell me what poem, and I'll be glad to r/r/c on it....

- Name : Courageous Dreamer
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- Joined : May 18, 2008
- Posts : 9560
Courageous Dreamer
16 years ago

Letting Go of You, please. :]
Thanks.

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- Name : HidinVictim
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Oct 26, 2007
- Posts : 346
HidinVictim
16 years ago

"What Happenes After The Break Up"
please and thank you!!

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- Name : Bianca
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- Joined : May 27, 2008
- Posts : 429
Bianca
16 years ago

Cold reality

thanks.

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
16 years ago

Okay, everyone is done.

Anyone else what some comments?

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- Name : Hollymariee
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- Joined : Mar 31, 2007
- Posts : 172
Hollymariee
16 years ago

If you'd do Much too late , or seven red roses , which ever you prefer , that would be fantastic <3

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- Name : LockedInEternity
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- Joined : Jan 15, 2006
- Posts : 384
LockedInEternity
16 years ago

Can you do "Our Rose" please

thnxx

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
16 years ago

Finished.

This post is now closed, thanks to everyone though, I enjoyed reading your poems....

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