Make me eat my words one on one

  • Michael D Nalley
    16 years ago

    Thank you so much for your critique of my poem "Regurgitation", although so far no one has responded eeeeeew. I know that anyone must think deeply to consume the whole meaning. It is said that a honey bee regurgitates and consumes nectar several times before it is honey. So if we think in terms of refinement rather rebuking the waste. It should feel more repulsive to eat someone else’s words than to be forced to eat our own. Though many times it is not what goes in that makes us unclean

    You ask me what we had learned from our most passionate discussion of the moral compass of right and wrong. My response should have been when we walk in the land of milk and honey we truly shall know

    Today offers us another opportunity to discover the abundance of Gods love and mercy

    I love you so much
    Mike

    With that being said no pun intended please tell me what this poem means to you I know it means a lot to me

    For an accurate critique I will praise your comment a return comment is in the bank

  • Michael D Nalley
    16 years ago

    I will check in and out most of the day

  • Robert
    16 years ago

    I have seen you around and I think I read a poem or two of yours please return the favor on any of my featured work Plot121